This fic is off to a good start. I'm sure it will be a good story if you update it. You can't just leave us hanging!

him intresting i would like too see what the fox is going to do with the info. good start but like all good starts it needs a second chapter. so please... hurry up!

Interesting.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

confused as hell?

WOO! This is an awesome story! Two... uh... wait... how many of us are there... wow... FOURTEEN THUMBS UP!... no seriously, there's like, seven of us. FAVORITING! Ja ne!(Good bye!)

This sounds good so far. It's not overdone and cliched, and at the same time, it's paced correctly so that you can actually get a grasp of each situation you write. Good job! I look forward to more.

P-chan

your story is intersting! cant wait to see the next chapter!

does that mean there's going to be a war between Konoha and Kumo or willKumo offer 'compensation'? Hopefully Sandaime won't be as lenient and peace loving as usual.

And how can a tengu be Naruto's clan mate?

nice and like how kyuu made hiashi arun for his money lol. ahaha he should have another meeting with kyuu at a latter date ahahah

not bad like to see where this is going

Most interesting your story has merit and your definition of Kitsune is highly accurate most people see Kyuubi as a senseless destroyer they often forget he or she in their story is Kitsune child of Deception and Saduction few things will keep Kitsune loyal and family and children are one of them un thievery the Kitsune art. I hope your able to make a smart Naruto.