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| barbiedoll 2008-09-27 ch 8, anon. | abuseGod! I luv this. But, is Mark so dark and sadistic that he will kill Shannon, just becos he luvs Jeff? Is Mark obsessed with Jeff and want to get rid of his competition? Please update soon! |
| punkhead 2008-08-15 ch 8,  | abuseWOO-HOO! that was awesome! great job! update soon! i wanna know what happened to shannon! |
| JNHwwe 2008-08-15 ch 8, | abuse:O OMG ! LOVED IT ... WOW ... i loved the end bit :D please updat next when you can .. and i will read and review :) X much luv X |
| I Love-Hate him 2008-08-14 ch 8, | abusegod, you need to finish this and soon! I need to find out whats gonna happen! |
| JeffMattShannonLuver123 2008-07-30 ch 7, | abuseMORE |
| JNHwwe 2008-07-04 ch 7, | abuseHey i love it please keep it up :) X much luv X |
| punkhead 2008-07-04 ch 7, | abuseHey. Yeah it was short, but it was something. I really want to know what happened to Shannon. I kind of have an idea, but not sure. Maybe you can do some flashbacks while Shannon is waiting for Matt. I also want to know where Mark is taking Jeff. To his hotel room? The next city where the next show is? I just hope that nobody dies. Maybe, Matt will find Shannon in...an alley beside his hotel, Mat will like, sort him out, Shannon will tell him what happened to him and Jeff when Mark came back and caught them trying to escape, and then Matt will be mad and him and Shannon will go find Jeff. Shannon will be mad and looking for revenge against Taker and with Matt there, maybe he could do it? I don't know. I'm not too good at continuing stories. I can start them, but not continue them. Just a suggestion. Good luck and AWESOME story. |
| I Love-Hate him 2008-07-04 ch 7, | abuseOmg, you really need to update faster! You're getting me all worked up! gr! anyway, I liked the chapter, And I like how you write Undertaker, being very dark in a sadistic way.. Lets hope Matt finds Shannon and Jeff before they die or something! nice chapter, update soon! |
| Caycee 2008-07-03 ch 7, anon. | abuseCool chapter and I don't mind that it was short. It was full of heart stopping suspense. Update ASAP please. |
| Amanda 2008-06-02 ch 6, anon. | abuseGreat story...I can't wait wait to read the rest. Please Update soon. |
| Caycee 2008-05-31 ch 6, anon. | abuseFor the love of God update. I wanna see what happens to Jeff and Shannon. Please, please, pretty please with sugar on top update ASAP. I love this story so much. |
| Kat RoadKill 2008-05-24 ch 5, | abuseOh that was good. You kept it real suspensful. :) |
| I Love-Hate him 2008-05-23 ch 6, | abusegood chapter! kinda sad though, Jeff just found Shannon then he gets grabbed too. Poor Jeff and Shannon. =( lets hope Matt gets to them before anything worse happens... |
| rebecca halstead 2008-05-22 ch 6, anon. | abuseplease continue i like the story so far! |
| punkhead 2008-05-10 ch 5, | abuseDamn! This is one kick ** story! Your full of ** if you think it sucks. I can't wait to find out what happens! Hurry up and update! Your killing me! |