Please make a new chapter soon! I love this story!

More?

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

I like it. I hope they find Shannon and Jeff soon.
Update soon!

LOVE IT! UPDATE ASAP! XOXOXOX

It's about time man, I thought you'd ended the fic. Thanks for updating again. I love the storyline, but Mark hurting Jeff and Shannon like that, evident from the bloodstains and sex smell left in the room, what's going to happen? Jeff has been taken by Mark and Shannon is no where to be found. Please don't let Mark kill them off. Don't wait too long to update, please. Looking forward to your post soon.

FINALLY! that was awesome :D
keep it coming

God! I luv this. But, is Mark so dark and sadistic that he will kill Shannon, just becos he luvs Jeff? Is Mark obsessed with Jeff and want to get rid of his competition? Please update soon!

WOO-HOO! that was awesome! great job! update soon! i wanna know what happened to shannon!

:O OMG ! LOVED IT ... WOW ... i loved the end bit :D please updat next when you can .. and i will read and review :) X much luv X

god, you need to finish this and soon!
I need to find out whats gonna happen!

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Hey i love it please keep it up :) X much luv X

Hey. Yeah it was short, but it was something. I really want to know what happened to Shannon. I kind of have an idea, but not sure. Maybe you can do some flashbacks while Shannon is waiting for Matt. I also want to know where Mark is taking Jeff. To his hotel room? The next city where the next show is? I just hope that nobody dies. Maybe, Matt will find Shannon in...an alley beside his hotel, Mat will like, sort him out, Shannon will tell him what happened to him and Jeff when Mark came back and caught them trying to escape, and then Matt will be mad and him and Shannon will go find Jeff. Shannon will be mad and looking for revenge against Taker and with Matt there, maybe he could do it? I don't know. I'm not too good at continuing stories. I can start them, but not continue them. Just a suggestion. Good luck and AWESOME story.

Omg, you really need to update faster! You're getting me all worked up! gr!
anyway, I liked the chapter, And I like how you write Undertaker, being very dark in a sadistic way..
Lets hope Matt finds Shannon and Jeff before they die or something!
nice chapter, update soon!