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Embers of Twilight
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
I regret not commenting earlier! This fic is incredibly enjoyable...The last two little paragraphs portray the emotion well without actually using the word.
You've just sufficiently increased my love for Amy Adams - is that even possible? - and now I feel the urge to watch the movie.
*Favorites*
reeselynrose
2008-10-23 . chapter 1
Okay, all I can really say is...well...amazing? Maybe... Extremely miraculous? Yes! You write amazingly and you give so much detail - I could NEVER have that patience - and you describe things wonderfully. I don't remember this scene because I haven't seen the movie for the longest time, but I don't really need to because you described things so well. Something I have trouble with is emphasis on details, but you do it amazingly. I can't wait to read another of your stories.

-ReeselynRose
misken67
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
This is the first fic I've read about this portion of the movie, and I must say, you conveyed the feelings of Giselle perfectly! Amazing work.
cantstoptubing
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
wonderfully written! i too enjoyed this scene (and, let's face it, the whole movie).
rfr4evr938
2008-04-23 . chapter 1
Wow. Just wow! This is AMAZING! Seriously. I'm so favoriting this story.
nne
2008-04-22 . chapter 1
very good! plz plz do more!
Rosa Cotton
2008-04-19 . chapter 1
I was always blown away by Amy and Patrick in that scene. And this was brilliant! I thought you wrote Giselle very well, describing all the things she went through in this part.

Your descriptions were beautiful. Those parts I especially liked:

“…angry!” She couldn’t help the jubilant laughter that burst from her after that. Who knew that just that one syllable could make her feel so… so… so free?

They were too close, sharing the same air, thoughts, and emotions; they were from different worlds: they were too different- it would take too big a leap of faith- and both knew they could never get over their differences. And yet, somehow, they were not close enough, as if each and every molecule that existed between them was a crime against the simple state of being.

Though she was from a fairytale world, she had never felt like a damsel in distress more than she did in that moment.

Incredible, incredible job done!! :D
Katia11
2008-04-16 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Breathtaking
! :) Wow... You've got me Enchanted. ;)

VerityFrancesB
2008-04-16 . chapter 1
THat was...fantastic! The imagery was beautiful, truely amazing. You are very talented!

V!
xox
Bronwen Melisande
2008-04-15 . chapter 1
Fantastic job- I loved it =]
hairsprayheart
2008-04-12 . chapter 1
Oh, my. This is simply magnificent. I'm glad that you've written more because you are truly a great addition to the community of writers here. Bravo!
Krickee Thompson
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
That was just wonderful! If I had the talent to write like that, I would have wished to write something just like that. Giving the characters even more depth and emotion is a gift. Thank you for sharing yours.
SparrowGirl88
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
Oh my indeed! lol! I loved it! So good!!
TheJiffyLube6
2008-04-04 . chapter 1
This was great. I loved it. This scene is one of my favorites and I really think you captured the emotions below the surface. There is so much in this scene that's going on that I think people miss, but thanks to your story it really brings all of those emotions to light. Also, your attention to detail is wonderful, I look forward to reading more from you.
tryanforever91
2008-04-04 . chapter 1
Wow!!

This was an amazing work. It was beyond amazing, although my vocab is a bit lacking at the moment for a better word.

First off, your descriptions of everything were brilliant. Nothing seems rushed or anything. Every single part of the story sounded well thought out and you really took the effort to describe everything down to the last detail, and it made this story amazing.

The way you wrote Giselle's character... well you definitely captured her. Your descriptions of her thoughts and emotions fit her to a T. The most satisfying part of the story for me was when she was trying to sort through all her emotions as they grew within her. And on that note; the way you described every aspect Giselle's anger was awesome.

This story meshes with the events in the movie perfectly, so great job on that.

I can't think of anything else to say, and i know I've only covered the tip of the iceberg. THis is truly a work of genius, and you are definitely a talented writer.

Great job!
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