Very well written. Almost made me cry there for a minute.

I absolutely love your stories- thank you for writing this.

*cries* That was touching.

Such a sweet one-shot, but also sad... so bittersweet, then. I wonder what Kurama is ill with... And I can't help but laugh at Hiei's answer to his first question. It's something out of a romance novel, but... it just seems like something he would say, but only to himself. Perfect! ^_^ I just love your stories! Keep at it~!

that was the most saddest and blissful thing i ever read! well done. the emotion in it was wonderful and extrodinary. loved it!

:-)

Daw...

I have always believed it to be both the burden and the privilege of those left behind to live all the life a loved one was unable to. I love Hiei's calm acceptance of that here--no drama, no over-blown angst, just a "yes" to whatever Kurama asks of him. That's real love. :)

Damn, you just had to make me cry didn't you. Awesome as always. You very eloquently portray their emotions even without them having voiced them.

I've always felt that it is much more in character that H&K would have denied their love and lived thier lives alone as opposed to the happily ever after endings we all love to read.

I've been wanting to write a fic much like this. Hiei would visit Kurama at the end of his human life and they would both silently regret having not shared their lives. I just don't think I can do it without a happy ending though. You've given me something to think about.

Ah, one of those Kurama's-dying-Hiei's-coping pieces--tender without being overly dramatic.

Shall have to investigate the book you referred to in your A/N now.

Just what I needed today 'NOT'(sarcasm) to cry, wonderful my dear...as always wonderful...:) A promise Hiei will have a hard time keeping...though he would find a way to be with his fox.

Sure, just make me bawl like a child while I sit here doped up on cough medicine! Thank you, I'm an emotional wreck now!

That being said, I am honoured that you dedicated this to me. I'm a big fan of angst (really? I bet you never guessed), and Kurama lying there slowly dying just tugged at my heart. Also, I loved how Hiei is now the conversationalist and Kurama is silent, and how he raised his body temperature to warm Kurama's hand.

And how Hiei's heart answer's Kurama's question? Beautiful. Poor Hiei, I don't want him to be alone! -cries somre more-

wow, that was intense but wonderful. I like Hiei's poetry but I heard it somewhere before. Oh well, nice story, but what's wrong with Kurama? he got Picalo-itis or somethin? Whatever it is I hope he gets better soon. *leaves flowers at his side* good luck Kurama ^^. Nice job again.