Ahh, I've gotta say.

I friggin' love that song.

And your piece was pretty good.

Except for it pretty much could've been any two characters.

I mean, you could shove anybody pretty much.

If there weren't the names, it could've been a Cleon, Zemyx, SoRi, and with some slight tweaking, it could've even bet het.

So, yanno.

But, it was really well written.

:)

loved it

This is so godd


i love your description of...everything


it makes it feel real...like it would actually happen!

Good job...and please keep wrtiting for fanfic!

I loved it. Great job :]

Wow...just...wow. You are an amazing writer! I loved this...I was totally in one of those moods for just some AKuRoku smut, and I clicked on this. But this was a lot more than just that. I really loved how you presented the angst in this. It was really realistic, and it wasn't just all "boohoo". The details you gave this and everything...I just don't don't what to say. I'm in awe. I'm cursing myself right now for being so tired and not being able to give you a better review. I loved the pain that both Axel and Roxas shared...Roxas because of his cutting, Axel because Roxas cut. I love the line: “I want to help you feel again.” In this story you really felt like they cared for one another, it wasn't just sex because they were horny. And the lemon was just the right length, it had enough detail but wasn't overly graphic and I loved it. I'm very impressed with your writing skills and already I want to see more. Detail is what grabs me about an author, because that is one of my weaknesses. Your attention to it is superb. Great, great, oneshot, thank you so much for a great read.

OMG *cries* this si so tragically beautiful, k-chan... i remember that feeling too... i remember feeling whole for a change... and the feeling of contentment when i threw my blades away and even the panic that still comes every now and then... and the beginging was very accurate, your mind likes to be very contradictory to itself and it's very confusing and painful... and now i can't stop crying... all i can do is hope that you call me today... i love you
ku

Yet again another great Fiction. I was extremely glad to see that you have wrote a new one, and what a great one it is. I'm loveing the angst in this story and i'm really glad that Axel was the one who was able to make Roxas feel.

I can't wait to read another story by you and it was nice reading soemthing other than "Understanding" even though I am dying to know what happens. But no rush or pressure. I'm sorry that you have/had to deal with depression but I think that it is great that you can express it through writing.

I really do wish you the best because not only are your stories just Fantastic, but you seem like a good person aswell.

Well Until Next story or chapter... Bye x

hm That story brought forward a lot of emotions. I really got the feel of depression and lonliness that glowed for this chapter. I read a lot of angst but I felt the real feelings behind this one shot. The ending wasn't happy as much as it was hopeful. I think that the flushing of the blades and the time with Axel changed his Roxas's outlook on his problems. I think there are still too many problems to constitute a happy ending. The idea behind his depression was kind of vague but I think I liked it better that way. I don't think I would consider it an AU because the basic thoughts and plot of the story still has some connection and meaning from the original Kingdom Hearts story. For a one shot, really had the best amount of detail in it. I`m glad about the tasteful and relivant feeling inside the lemon (you are good at that). It wasn`t like: depression, depression, sex, cured. It kept the ideas and plot flowing and kept the emotions and ideas realistic. That was important.
I am glad you found some inspiration so you can continue your writing, no matter what story or idea that it encourages you to write. I`m sorry your still having a hard time and I give you my best as always. Thanks for delivering this beautiful one shot. Bye.