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Stormgirl415
2008-08-27 . chapter 14
YAY! We've been waiting for this forver thank you!

I like what's going on, it's all very complex and very interconnected. Why aren't the bad guys able to track them down though? Don't they have Mordru? And where are the older kids that they can talk to their younger sibs but can't get free?

I did read the end of chppie 7, but all I got was the Violet was in some sort of underground water system, and we don't know who was watching her!

Please post again soon, I want to see what happens and what the Valkyrie Code will do and I want to learn more about Impulse!
Bffl
2008-08-27 . chapter 14
OK cool chapter, Ok Drew and Brainy argue loads? Well what do you call that? I think we may just change Drew to Skit! LOL Update soon.
1000GreenSun
2008-08-27 . chapter 14
That was long! Great chappie! PPMS ^.^
Stormgirl415
2008-08-15 . chapter 13
I'v been reading this story fow awhile before I registered and I finally registered (yay!), so I though I'd comment. I love this story and how these kids keep fighting back, and how well Lois is handling all this, but I have a few questions. The kids met up with their older siblings a few chapters ago, right? But I thought the legion was captured by all the bad guys. Also, where in the universe are Drew and Violet?
Bffl
2008-08-09 . chapter 13
Cool Story! Keep up the great work!
DisasterCode7
2008-08-08 . chapter 4
AWESOME STORY! I finnaly read it, and I'm glad I did. It's great!
Bffl
2008-08-07 . chapter 12
I don't get it. Why did they have to leave? Apart from that great story and i hope you write some more!
1000GreenSun
2008-08-01 . chapter 11
So this was the chappie you were talking about? Great job, keep up the great work! ;)
1000GreenSun
2008-07-30 . chapter 10
Awesome! I'm really liking this fic...Keep up the fantabulous work! ^_^
Aniki-Yura
2008-04-10 . chapter 4
Oh how cute! I like that part were Violet hugs Brainy.
Aniki-Yura
2008-04-09 . chapter 3
Just as I thought, a good chapter!! It was so cute! I especially loved the part where Shrinking Violet wakes up to find Brainy taking a nap with her. I saw your picture of that on Deviant art. Oh, right, I'm known as Doglovingloonatic there. Hee! Hee! I wonder what Brainy is going to say when he wakes-up.

Tito: At least she didn't yell this time.
Aniki-Yura
2008-04-09 . chapter 2
I can't wait for the next chapter! I have a feeling it's going to be good.
Lady Dragon010
2008-03-31 . chapter 1
Please continue and my older sister ladydragon010 loves yin yang
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