 Adekis 2008-07-30 . chapter 1Aw, they're out of character, but it's really cute. That means I don't care.
You wrote them OOC, but the story is cute, and at least they arn't OOC to the point where it's bad taste.
Also: YOU SAID JOUNOUCHI! NOT JOEY, NOT JOU, BUT JOUNOUCHI! More people should do that. |
 Kalinovskaja 2008-04-01 . chapter 1I don't know if I can write this review without getting *very* mushy XD
Well, I'll try, hehe.
Thank you very, very much for dedicating this fic to little ol' me! ^-^
I was so surprised when I saw it, and I had to read it twice just to be sure :D
You know I love your stories, for real, so this means a lot to me. Thanks again ^-^
And now, back to reviewing!
Oh my, a rather fluffy fic! I'm shocked! XD
It's very sweet, and, ok, I'll admit it, *easier* to read than Ashes or Fragments.
But you know what's funny? I like Fragments more and more. I've read it once again, and, well, I don't know, somehow I'm more fond of it. Human brain... fascinating stuff :D
But once again I digress...
What I liked here the most was the tenderness that exists between Seto and Jou. Yeah, the both have to deal with some ravishing thoughts (hehe), but the way Seto took care of Jou, and later, when he watched him sleep... it was such a serene, sweet scene ^-^
I'm babbling again, eh? I'll stop, now XD
Thank you once again... you really made my day ^-^
Hugs,
K. |
 devotedtodreams 2008-04-01 . chapter 1Aw, this was so cute...! I liked it very much, just like your other puppyshipping fics ^_^
Yeah, fluff is always nice after reading something dark - in fact, I like it practically all the time ^_^;;
Brilliant work, love the vocab and everything... I don't know what else I can say. The least I can do is to leave you this review and add this story to my favs. You rock! :) |