Hey, I'm glad to be reviewing one of your stories again. I was wondering if you'd ever write Zelda fanfiction again! Anyway, you may not remember who I am since it's been quite awhile, but I used to leave reviews for your story "Nothing Lasts Forever". My name was Chaos Wielder/Lady Turmoil then (you might still find some of those reviews there, by the way.).

Honestly, I think this story was fantastic. It really let us see from Saria's and Mido's point of view very well. That seven-year gap had to have been very difficult for both of them, especially with the aftermath of the Deku Tree's death, Ganondorf's minions taking over and Link being absent when all of that went on. I particularly think that you captured Mido the best out of the two. It's not unreasonable to think that this is how he felt after so many years-ashamed and full of regret.

I think I just saw one typo in the story, but other than that it was great. I really can't give any constructive critique because this was nearly perfect.

Holy shit man, That was really deep. Amazingly worded too.

When did you write that? It's really good, and of course Mido's perfect, but you always do Mido well.

-lamia

This story was so sad and sweet, I guess the word, well, I don't really have a word good enough for it. It was just really really awesome.

This was great! I enjoyed reading it. It was bitter sweet and sad, the sadness struck into my heart and soul. I really liked it.