um i cant really read this becuz its all squesed together! and when u said rena i didnt really no who it was until they said her full name,sorry but i guess this is a littl flame. but i do like how this starded!

O'n jaahomg e hossha Dporrk podls miw. Ti rhaeta avuta sla Dporrotl. Si neya sla paxoaw tonrha: *bimsouat blemsomg jpin sla hets paxoaw*

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O! WRITE MORE! *kow tows* We're not worthy! We're not worthy! *keeps on chanting*

good story but it feels like you rushed the ending a bit, I wish you hadn't because then the story could have ended better and allowed for an intriguing sequel possibility...

Very Goood Story!

Okay, i've already read the entire story but i wasn't signed up when i read it. it is great!

Keep writing!

Hey this is a great story! I just love the story line and i just can't wait for more chapters to coem out! Onegai more soon! ja ne _

Wow!this is a great story!

more!

hey this was the best story besides Winter Snow by Crystal this is my favorite #2 story. i love it so much but you have to write i few more chapter and leave me hanging please i need to know what happeneds lol ttyl e-mail me is you like ok ttyl

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Salor Moon fan (sorta

Cassandra

great story...just a bit confusing...but still understandable. It was great and i hope you keep on writing

Hi, i just wanted to say your story is SOSOSO good, please continue it and finish it when you can. I love it. I also wanted to say good job and keep up the good work! -

Great! I love it! MOOOOOOORRRRREEEEEEEE! I want more chapters!

Thankies! .;

Captivating. Please hurry with the next parts, it was just getting good.

I like the new chapter. That was different when you made Serena be possessed by Metallia. Very original. Keep up the good work and write more soon.