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| apillow 2008-10-05 ch 8,  | abuseupdate this one please x__x as well as growth spurt. |
| Shiotashi 2008-10-03 ch 8, | abuseI don't like Naruto but I adore your story. Very, very cute. :3 I DEMAND ANOTHER CHAPTER. >:D *favorites* |
| tatewaki2000 2008-09-21 ch 8, | abuseinstead of sleeping .. I'm gonna enjoy this fic ^^ nice job |
| landmonster 2008-09-01 ch 8, | abuseI DEMAND ANOTHER CHAPTER. |
| landmonster 2008-09-01 ch 6, | abuseLawl, it would be funny if someone from the ToS universe came, saw Lloyd, and was all, "ZOMG It's the savior! *bows continuously and grovels*" and everyone else is 'WTF?' |
| landmonster 2008-09-01 ch 5, | abuseArgh, Kakashi should find out that Lloyd has kicked Kratos' ass. Twice. Though once was for realz. |
| landmonster 2008-09-01 ch 2, | abusePoor Lloyd, he goes from being the most powerful person in the world(s) to a kid. I hope he grows up strong! |
| Korraganitar the NightShado... 2008-08-23 ch 8, | abusenice fic. Also, have you considered the idea of joining togethar Naruto's world with Symphonia (i call the combined worlds that... seems right to me). I mean, the eternal sword IS and artifact of untold power... it could do that! ~Korrag |
| I.K.A. Valian 2008-08-23 ch 8, | abuseHmm, great! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to reading this. I went on a week long vacation and I'm finally getting caught up on all the stories I have to read. I still have several of yours to go through. I personally feel that Genis could stay and not really be all that intrusive in the story if he was inducted into the academy to teach young ninja or something. After all, he's Raine's little brother and he's good with Magic (he could probably do the Rasengan really easily... or that teleportation thing the Fourth had, though maybe not... still a cool idea though). Also, wouldn't all this inter dimensional travel poke a bigger and bigger hole in the fabric of space and time? Isn't that a bad thing? Would that create some kind of space-time bridge (wormhole) between the two worlds? Wouldn't it be bad if suddenly the Akatski or other rogue ninja suddenly aquired exspheres to enhance their already powerful abilities? Hmm, things to think about... I liked the way you played out the test scene, though you could have described the setting a bit better. ~I.K.A. Valian |
| Derek the Demon Prince 2008-08-20 ch 8, | abuseThis story could only be summed up in my eyes as FREAKING AWESOME! XD Please update soon. |
| icedragon54 2008-08-14 ch 8, | abuseplease update soon! Naruto/tos crosses are really rare! |
| SoraKeyblade Master 2008-08-12 ch 8, | abuseGreat Chapter, don't send Genis back permanatly, have Genis be able to come back if he does leave. Also mabey consider bringing Colette into the story somehow. But I love this chapter, Keep up the Great work |
| SoraKeyblade Master 2008-08-12 ch 7, | abuseLol, nice Chapter freaky, I like how you brought in Genis. I think you should bring in Colette too. |
| Alaia Skyhawk 2008-08-10 ch 8, | abuseNice fic. I actually held off reading this since I'd never watched Naruto, but now that I have... (Falls over laughing head off) This is great, and I'm glad I waited since I wouldnt have gotten a lot of the jokes otherwise. Can't wait for the next update. Alaia Skyhawk |
| Ptoras 2008-08-09 ch 8, | abuseIsn't "nii-san" OLDER brother? Naruto is younger than Lloyd... shouldn't it be otoutou? Oh well. The spaces between the lines are kinda annoying, but I like the plot. |