Really? Luffy uses Gear second only now? How i am supposed to react to that? Was he even seriously fighting before that? (Also when he goes to gear second it's no logner "Gomu Gomu no BAZOOKA" instead it's "Gomu Gomu no jet Bazooka" the same with every other attack :/)

in my opinion making nami a vapire is complete bulshit... Just seems weird that this guy Nikolai would turn her into his underling... Especially if he wants her to be his wife... That's just dumb!

lol u should have written this as an action with some romance on the side lol :P so boring with all this fighting sigh takes soooooo long man :P

Lol I got the zoo lander quote. Very nice.

great story!

The more I read this...the more it begins to sound like Inuyasha.

Blades of Blood belong to a character named Inuyasha. (I dnt really know if you know this because I haven't checked your profile yet.) In essence, you just changed the name to Claws of Blood. The bees at the end of this chapter sound like Naraku's saimyoushou (poisonous insects), who is yet another character from Inuyasha.

Overall, great story, I can't wait to read the next chapter. _

It seems more like lust, instead of love.

Also Kenshin? Glotoni? Gluttony and Rurouni Kenshin? You made these characters?

whats with the inuyasha attack reference?

um why is robin black?

Excellent story. Those two (Luffy & Nami) deserve to be together.

Everytime Kenshin shouts the name of one of his moves (i.e:rainbow something-something) I keep expecting sailer moon or powerpuff-girls to pop out of know where.

It's not that I hav anything against it, its just that Kenshins a guy so it seems kinda funny for him to be going around spouting rainbowness.

It's like me making Zoro jump around saying "onigiri-flower-power"(heehee)! Or luffy using something like "Pink-Pink-Postol", or "bubble-gum bazooka"!(haha) well, maybe its not that bad but, I just had to point it out.

cool, sorta like an manga verson of vampirates

i know i know,

a rather late revieuw

but anyways...

well, i like your writestyle, buteh...judging from you comments at the end and start of the story. the writerrs are plural?

well, not inportant, though i really thing you did it nicely with multiple writers, since i dont see a difference in style(though i secretly didnt pay too much attention to that3(A))

btw, i seemed to notice a silent hint at garp, you know, the reason why hiis punch CAN hurt luffy...his punch using the "first of love" and all, well your just the first person(or persons) who ive met who noticed the same(since nami's punches always seems to be effective on luffy):P

hmm, why did i type this again?

ah well, im going to read the second chapter now

cya

some weirdo that goes by the name rdhao

it ' s so good congratulation . I hope to see another of yours fanfic

Your sense of humor is hilarious. You portrayed luffy quite well.

The vampire thing kinda threw me through a loop.

excellent.