Reviews for Love with Asari Lotions

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oliveros 2008-05-22 ch 12, anon.	abusei really liked it, congrats!
Beth Shepard 2008-05-22 ch 12, anon.	abuseI usually dont like Liara because she is so dull and thought that her use in the game was more for the interspecies relationship. However, giving insight into character like this, I see her flaws and why she's so straight forward that way. I really like it, and I see I'm not the only one that likes her finally.
antobalo 2008-05-22 ch 12,	abuseThis was a delightful exchange. Fun to read. Nice job.
The Tyrant Hamster 2008-05-20 ch 12,	abuseHehehehe, y'know I think this might be my favourite chapter yet, maybe, it's hard to say cus you offer quite a diverse range of elements. I only know as much about Joker as can be gathered from these chapters of yours, but I've liked him so far, his tendency to interrupt other people's storylines, so I was really cool to get a fuller sense of him here. I really like how you portray his character, I dunno how close it is to how he IS, but I know I like it, especially that innuendo at the end, hehe XD. Liara was surprisingly well-written here as well, you made her keep apologising without it sounding forced, fluidly-executed, so yeah, I liked Joker, I liked Liara, I liked this chapter :D.
Jon Robson 2008-05-19 ch 12, anon.	abuseSince my favourite romance was an Ash/Shepard, I didn't get to actually participate with the other ones. I did however enjoy this chapter and the dialogue between Joker and Liara. It's pretty much spot on. I'd like it if you had more depth to the fight scenes and interaction on sidequests. But I understand it's not supposed to focus too much on the quests. I would have liked it though if you had written more emphasis on the Ontario chapter.
Jon Robson 2008-05-19 ch 10, anon.	abuseThe conversation between the characters, such as Shepard to Joker and Shepard to Ashley was pulled off really believably. However the bits in the feild could have had a little more work done to them. I felt as though they were merely fillers. The bit about Noveria also didn't have much depth. The conversation and flirting was done really well, in fact it was almost spot on to the characters in the game.
The Dark Magician 2008-05-19 ch 12, anon.	abuseVery nice chapter, I love the way she was pursuing things here and the nervous tension that was portrayed. Excellent writing. :D
dantegirl84 2008-05-19 ch 12,	abuseInteresting and so lovely. I like this ^^
Lori 2008-05-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseV, this is awesome. Your writing is always good. I saw some coverage on this game and watched my boyfriend play it. I like the characters too. I can't wait to play it when he's done.
Lori 2008-05-18 ch 12, anon.	abuseHey V, just reviewing your wonderful story. I don't understand it much, but the grammar, and your word play is wonderful. very cute little story, ^^
Parle 2008-05-18 ch 12,	abuseThis alert was a surprise. haha that's exactly like Liara. She's very aggressive pursuing a relationship, but I'm surprised she didn't look up Joker's files on the extranet beforehand. Nicely done on Joker's part.
Euphoria Quzori 2008-05-18 ch 12,	abuseHaa ^^ I love Joker's character. [: Liara is so nervous O.O It's crazy. ♥
Iesha 2008-05-18 ch 12, anon.	abusethat was funny and cute! ^_^
The Dark Magician 2008-05-13 ch 11, anon.	abuseNice chapter, I really love the interactions here. The tension in the middle part of the chapter was great, I found it really enjoyable and tense at times, especially during the landing section. Can't wait for more. :D
The Tyrant Hamster 2008-05-11 ch 11,	abuseMan, Pressly 's capslock key is stuck isn't it XD? Hehe, wonder if he's all-caps in the game or just has a loud voice. Anyways, there's something in this chapter I really like, and that's the first sign of real dissent and changing allegiances amongst the crew, namely with Tali. Until now there hasn't been any real... Conflict I guess is the word, amongst the crew, it's all been a mix of irritation and low level bickering, so I'm glad to see a real case of someone wanting to jump ship, especially this one, as it's very convincingly portrayed. This chapter as a whole is good and I liked all of it, but that sign that it's not all one big happy family is my favourite detail in this installment ^^.

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