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mabye you could make her become a social outcast(like us TEEHEE) and band together with a bunch of other outcasts(soraTEEHEEHEE)
Sora and riku sitting in a tree F-R-A-N-K-I-N-G(TEEHEEHEEHEE!)
it would be funny if it happenend(TEETEETEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEE!)
I IN LUV JODIN LE
FRANkATE

Some mistakes, but still good.
Format is funny too. Very odd...
Very sad. Poor Kairi.

Hey. First off, let me say that I enjoyed reading this, even though it is kind of dark and really depressing. Why must you make Kairi go through more pain? J/K, this just makes me like her more. There are a few grammatical errors in the first couple of line and reading in italics kind of hurts my eyes, but for the story itself it was really interesting. IMHO this story has potential to reveal a lot about Kairi beyond that of Sora and Riku. I love background stories.

Quick questions though, what is the timeline of this as pertaining to the actual story? Because when the first one starts off they are all pretty young. Girls stealing and smoking equals awesome. Actual girls, meaning little girls, stealing and smoking is kind of disturbing.

All in all, good job and keep writing. Hope to read more of this.