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| loveRomance825 2008-05-13 ch 12,  | abuseWhat a minute Zatta? did u make that up How could the powerful have a girl but since she got black hair is it also pointy like Hiei's. How cute though she has red eyes Wh the hell is Mary hello Kuwabara is in love with with Yukina and she loves him back so could they marry different people? Also, if Zatta inherited her parents great power how could she go through her whole child hood not knowing? Great story though |
| littlekawaiifirefox 2008-05-11 ch 12, | abusewow...yeah...all i can say is HURRY WITH THE EPILOGUE! O.O ^^ loves your stuffs, girlie! |
| Panda-chan31 2008-05-09 ch 12, | abuseI don't see how you say that the epilogue sucked... I really liked it! It tied off the story very well. Can't wait for the sequel! |
| icemaster91 2008-05-09 ch 12, | abuseyah si have to agree with kensington im gonna read yur other story and wait for the sequel (silently offers cookie) well...can't wait:) |
| Darkness is My Savior 2008-05-09 ch 12, | abuseI liked the ending! LOoking forward to the sequel. arranged marriages always set up an interesting story line... SPOO |
| Just 2 Dream Of You 2008-05-09 ch 12, | abuseWow. LOL Anyway u need to change this to complete I did like it though XD |
| Panda-chan31 2008-05-09 ch 11, | abuseYay! Finally! I'm so happy that Hiei and Maykuh got around their little dilemma. I'm sad that this story is ending, but happy at the same time. can't wait for the epilogue! |
| littlekawaiifirefox 2008-05-09 ch 11, | abuseO.O if the epilogue is next...then...PLEASE tell me that you have a sequel planned!! O.O job well, done, dear!! job well done!! ^^ (i used Astrid's pet name for you...lol) |
| loveRomance825 2008-05-08 ch 11, | abuseMaykuh sure does is forgiving person but who isn't when it comes to Hiei but how could they spent all night kissing without Her new brothers interupting and what about air. Anywho Hiei and Maykuh make such a cute couple and I can't wait for the next chapter. Have you written any other fanfics ? |
| Just 2 Dream Of You 2008-05-08 ch 11, | abuseKAWAII!!11!!11!!11!! ahem i like all of it! good job ^^ |
| icemaster91 2008-05-08 ch 11, | abusewhy r you ending it its so good (insert random shining starry things here) TT.TT |
| loveRomance825 2008-05-05 ch 10, | abuseOMG I love your story what a great idea. But y is Hiei in regret about kissing Maykuh? Wouldn't it cool if she stayed withJin for a few days. Where's Keiko and the other girls? hope you update soon! |
| peaceamongyourshatteredsoul 2008-05-04 ch 10, | abuseOkay, I enjoy reading this fanfic and hope you update soon but I would like to point out some things that happen at various points in this fic. You use the wrong word to describe something and there have been a few spelling errors but other than that I found it an enjoyable read. PAYSS or Rei |
| keimei2127 2008-05-04 ch 10, | abuseI'm really enjoying this fic. This chapter was cute including Jin and the boys. :) please update soon! |
| bonbon2007 2008-05-04 ch 10, | abuseAH that was cute. i can't wait for the update. |