Hm... I am certain you know my tastes when it comes to pairings, but I shall keep reading and see what comes. The concept of Mewtwo as an evil entity makes me a bit edgy (though I've done it myself and enjoyed it), but I'll just wait and see how things turn out.

As for the humanoid pokemon forms...intriguing. The concepts you've brought up are ones I haven't come across before, so you have my interest.

Well, I look forward to your next chapter. See ya'.

~ WiseAbsol

I'm going to assume you've read the manga - that seems to be your source, though I cannot be certain.

I enjoyed this chapter - parts of it struck me as brilliant in their wording: the bit about her nightmares and the pain were what come to mind readily. The only constructive criticism I can offer is to be very, very careful with your characters and their dialogue - you seem on the verge of creating Mary Sue/Marty Stu characters. Miyuki was alright until the compliments began to pile up. Though to be quite honest, it was more Luca that concerned me - don't make anyone too perfect. Flaws are good - they make your creations believable and intriguing to read about. It creates conflict and obstacles to be triumphed over. Perfection is overrated - no one wants to hear about people who have no flaws!

Beyond that rant, I enjoyed the chapter. I look forward to your next update.

~ WiseAbsol

that lookes so cool.

Started off a little cliche, but after that it flowed...and it seems rather interesting so far - you seem to have some idea of what you're doing, which is refreshing from how things usually are on this site.

I'll put this under my Alerts...I'm curious about it.

~ WiseAbsol