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| nicole 2008-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseupdate soon please |
| Auralia Mortimer 2008-07-27 ch 6,  | abuseaw do you know when they will get bigger? |
| Blackangle2011 2008-07-24 ch 6, | abusei think he should let them stay little theyre so cute :) update soon |
| Crazy-Kiracat39 2008-07-14 ch 6, | abusePlease update. I love this story. |
| canis3 2008-06-22 ch 4, | abusei love your story but please update |
| jaderook 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseThese characters may have the same names as those in JKR's Harry Potter universe, but they're not in character. Why are you afraid to use contractions in your dialogue? JKR is known for writing fantastic dialogue and when her characters don't have the same type of voice coming through in a fic, it shows. Also, your title is wrong. It should read, 'Thicker Than Water' as 'then' is not correct usage. I'm all for AU, but it has to be believable. |
| CrimsonTearsKK 2008-06-02 ch 6, | abuseplease please update |
| Unknown Brilliance 2008-06-01 ch 6, | abuseEcho...echo...echo...is anybody home? I like this story, it's been a long time since you've updated it...puppy dog eyes...please tell me it hasn't been abandoned. |
| A.neverending.dream 2008-05-17 ch 6, | abuseupdate.. and if anyone says it sux... they don't know a good story if it bit them in the @$$ |
| projectjay 2008-05-16 ch 6, | abuseI never laughted so hard as when they tourted poor lucius. These two could keep any of his death eaters in line by threating to have them baby sit those two . |
| TLDriver66 2008-05-12 ch 6, | abuseHow long until Sev and Harry don't get spankings anymore? |
| jadedragon36 2008-05-10 ch 6, | abuseI actually like this story it is different...love Sev and Harry as kids I vote that they remain that way for a few months, imagine Voldemort being a good father at least a better father than these two boys ever had they are experiencing better childhoods than they originally had. Love the torture of ‘Uncle Lue’ I think both boys adult counterparts could not have gotten better revenge LOL |
| SevSnape123 2008-05-06 ch 6, | abuseUpdate ASAP can't wait for the next chapter :) |
| Patita 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseWhile it is amusing to read about Snape and Harry as children, the one main complaint I have about your story is that you seem to be obsessed with spanking. I mean, this is Voldemort you're talking about! Why would he do something as simple as a spanking? Even if it is for his two supposed sons. Also, you mentioned other possible punishments, but he seems to go straight to spankings each time anyway. It gets a little tedious to continually read about spankings without seeing much development in the plot. On the other hand, congratulations on not having spelling mistakes and using correct grammar. |
| darknessmolded 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuseGood story! |