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| Piper Chris fan 2008-08-23 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Very nice story. I often think about 24 and their way of storytelling. It is a very good show with a very good concept but sometimes I feel bad about missing out on all the fun, private things and sides of the characters. So, thank you for this. it was lovely. |
| lisaluvsfox22 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseCute ;D |
| MiB-24 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI must say, for your first "24" story, you did very well. I haven't read a Tony & Michelle story in ages that didn't come away with either feeling disgusted or angry, but yours left me with a smile. I hope to read more of your stories soon and come away with the same good feeling. |
| Reikofanfan 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseahaha...lovely Michelle, can't imagine her cooking...but a beautiful smart woman with great cooking skill, wow, would be really irresistible!! |
| gill 2008-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abusecute as a button ! |