Do guess this is dead huhu?

Are you dead? lol

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Mr Bal, this is going into my favourites. One of my top actually. Creativity in dealing with main storylines is so refreshing.

good chapter but a short one

All right! A Dremora! What cast is he? Markynaz? Caitiff? Or most improbably a Dremora Valkynaz? Anyway great job, I was longing for the Dremoras because they're cool.

-Tremble Wolf

So is this after the main quest? Has Finn already dealt with Dagon? Maybe I already read that information and forgot, but this is a great story and I am really enjoying it.

-Tremble Wolf

Whoa! Is that, at the end there, part of the original story-line? Or did you make that up? Because it is AWESOME, either way!

I've really enjoyed reading this story. Well-written, interesting and great characters. So glad that Nerte is rescued. ^_^

I am still reading and very much enjoyed this chapter. Your Sheogorath is so much fun to read, and I'm liking Fin more and more as well. :D

I'm really enjoying this story, and this chapter is just delightful. :) You seem to capture Sheogorath convincingly. Great job.

P.S. I love Nerte.

Great chapter

i love this story. just the kind of creative but not too lore-destroying story the site needs. so much more than another tired retelling.

Nerte is my favorite.

Oh. No, you were right, there was stuff there I hadn't known... o__o