I still cannot get my mind to comprehend the fact that a story as brilliant as this one has such a criminally low number of reviews. It's just so very BELIEVABLE, all of it. The characterizations are spot on, and I love how Zuko and Katara's relationship isn't sudden, and in fact builds gradually thanks to little, inconsequential things in each chapter. The unfolding plot has me on the edge of my seat eager to discover more (who is writing those fake letters?! Unless it's the newly discovered traitor, Mazo! Argh!!), and the humour sprinkled here and there is absolutely GENIUS. Just when I promised I would detach myself from uncompleted fanfics, I went and fell in love with yours!
To avoid being a pain, because I understand that sometimes an author has a hard time in finishing stories, whether it's due to writer's block, or simply because writing it no longer holds that spark of interest and excitement it used to, I won't demand you update. I'll just subtly hint that a new chapter would be very much apreciated, both by old fans and recent ones like myself. It'd be such a shame to see such potential go to waste... If this story is abandoned, could you please let me/us know?
Signed, your newest fan.

Lovely fic. I look forward to read more.

In this Chapter, I think you made a mistake time-wise. Mazo states that the siege of New Ozai/Omashu was years ago. But the time span of Avatar: The Last Airbender is one year, and the seige happened sometime between the first and second season.

If what you stated was correct (This takes place after The Firebending Masters) Then the seige and this statement should only be within a year.

This story is absolutely amazing. Truly amazing. I see that you haven't updated in quite a while, but I'm hoping beyond hope that you somehow get back and keep the ball rolling because this story is too good to just stop. I understand a writers block, but you already have a really great thing going for you here. It's cleverly written, original, and extremely addictive. I pray that you return to this and keep it going, even it takes another year or two- because even then, many people will be overjoyed and will flood back to this wonderful piece of work(:

Hey, this story is by far one of the best i've read on this website. i guess since you haven't updated for over a year you're probably not into this whole thing anymore but if you ever do come back to it i'm sure heaps of people would be pleased. It really is a fantastic story and i want to see how it ends.

I know this hasn't been updated in forever, but I'm going to review anyway. Did you ever read Looking For Alaska by John Green? In his book, the main character gets the nickname "Pudge" because he's so skinny. I was cracking up at that part in your story. If you didn't read Looking For Alaska, great minds think alike. And you should, because it's a good book :)
This story is really good, I like many things about it and can't find much for constructive critisim. So congrats on that.
There is one thing though, Mazo is the betrayer? Really? Really, really? Why? That boy really grew on me and I loved his relationship with Jing-Wei. They totally reminded me of Zuko and Katara and when you killed the hope of Jingzo (totally made that up :D) it made me feel a loss of hope for Zutara.
Other than that, congrats on creating a good and believable work of fiction. I hope that this will someday be updated. If not, I don't feel that I wasted any time, because this was so good. I'll just feel perpetually cliff-hangered. Possibly for the rest of my life. Do you really want that to happen to me?

Wait, wait, WAIT.

Suki is...and then Toph got...but Mazo wasn't...and Sokka was almost...but he was saved?
Someone is betraying them...Mai? No. Who? Fake letters?
And then the thing with the movement in the closet that wasn't Zuko?
Okay, my brain officially HURTS!
...Sorry that my review makes absolutly NO sense. I can't really think properly right now.

No. What happens next!

Your story is amazing. At the beginning, I wasn't sure about the story but then so much stuff happened and I couldn't stop reading.

Hope you finish. It's very well done.

Holy hell on high water. This just keeps getting better and better. Pretty please update.

You are brilliant. I adored each and every single scene left me entertained. I especially enjoyed the Blutara moments. Brilliant writing.

*squeals at the excerpt* Blutara

*does a happy jig at all the Zuko/Katara bonding* Sokka is at times a genius. I want to hug him for suggesting the big kids get the bed.

*grins at Zuko/Dash* The little boy is all colors of adorable, and he and Zuko are just too cute together. I love the way he looks up to Zuko

*is worried about the letter and Azula* looks like someone in the WL is a betrayer.

I am loving this fic and how well you have written everything and the plot that is unfolding.

*gets down on hands and knees* I am not too proud to beg. Please please please please please please pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update.

Your writing is addictive. I swear I have not been able to focus on anything else but reading this fic. The characters are so in character the situations they find themselves in are both funny and plot forward like it is in the show. I flove it all.

Holy caped batman!

Someone is running around claiming to be the Blue Spirit and ruin the good name that Zuko established for himself. I wonder who is is, and why they are doing this.

Great writing

Sokka blinked, leaning over towards Toph. “Are we still talking about Mazo and Jing-Wei?”

Face met fist.

Ha! I love the bits of laugh out loud humor that you have placed through out the chapters. I'm also digging the fact that Zuko's instant was to protect Katara and take all of the blow he thought was coming, and also the fact that he has now collapsed on her.

Great writing

But the fire prince would not be allayed. “Do you know who she is?” He spat angrily, “She’s Azula’s right-hand puppet! She’s the one who knocked me out! She’s from the Fire Nation!”

Mai blinked at his proclamations, seemingly unfazed, and settled her eyes on the waterbender.

“I’m his ex-girlfriend.”

Ha! That is my favorite part of this whole chapter. Great great writing, I am excited to see where this is all headed.

Please do update. Don't let this great fic go unfinished.