Hm, considering that the first time I read this I had no idea what was going on, I'd say that playing the game has made a huge improvement in the story's coherency. Honestly, this was the first FFVI fic that I had ever read and before I played the game I was confusing characters and places left and right. Moral of the story: when getting into a new fandom, play the game first. Although, reading Convergence first gave me some rather helpful hints on pieces of the game where I would have been stuck otherwise. The unfortunate part is that I was still lost in the sewers for hours. One of my worst habits in videogames is getting horribly lost. *sighs*
Well, SquallHarry is now one of my favorite pairings for FFVI and I have you to thank for that. I liked the way you kept Harry's impact on the story to reasonable levels, I've noticed that too many crossovers hijack the plotline and make it deviate to an unbelieveable extent. Although, I'm not sure if I just missed it in the earlier chapters, but is it ever explained how Harry speaks to Squall?
On another note, You did a good job in keeping Rinoa fairly likeable, which is a feat in and of itself. I applaud you for that, it's something that not even Squaresoft managed. *grins*

~Amaya

Harry isn't really importent in this fic, is he? accept for the fect that Squall is with him and not with Rinoa, he didn't play any importent part.

I love your fight scenes 'They fought, Squall and his team won.' LOL. That's way better than some of the fight scenes I come across.

Love the story...!


I'll be checking in on youand your writings!

Ciao

Mou'Ikka

exactly, what's Harry's role in this story? it seems like you can just pluck him out of the equation and it won't make an impact to the story, except for Squall not talking with somebody in his head.

I LOVE YOU! I love the pairing SquallxHarry and I can never find it. It was so sweet! And the fact that Rinoa couldn't sink her claws into Squall made it all the better. Would you consider writing any more SquallxHarry fanfiction? Or maybe TidusxHarry or other adorable pairings like that? Whatever. Many, many kudos to you!

I really enjoyed the story. I thought it was well-done. You incorporated Harry into the story without making him an overpowering figure like so many crossovers do. His effects on the storyline were reasonable, rather than being nonexistent or changing the plot completely. I'm still a little confused as to why Squall was able to hear him all of those years, but perhaps I skipped some info while reading. Thank you for a good story.

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

Wow, great story. I can honestly say that this is one of the better stories that I've read lately (especially the grammar since it's hard to find stories with decent grammar). Weither or not you continue it is up to you, but I can defently see how a squeal could be made.

Grat story, keep up the good work.

Awsome story! First FF8 x-over I've read, and it's very good.

This is good! I can't believe you wrote all of FFVI in seven chapters! Well, I loved how you stuck with the storyline...mostly anyways. And I loved how you porryed Harry, even if we don't see him too much.

This was an excellent story thank you very much

Pretty good, pretty cool, pretty awesome... unfortunately slightly boring. But still good.

Why do I now have this horrible image of Selphie dating Vash the Stampede? ... *cries, and continues to read*

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Eh? The end? *blinks* How did that happen? Oh, right. That little next chapter button.