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| whitehound 2008-04-07 ch 1,  | abuseGood to see you writing again. Snape's so unused to anyone doing anything for him, he'd be bound to fear the worst. |
| septentrion 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThe interactions between those two sound interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| wywrite 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI like it! I am left wondering, though, whether the rather cold and contained "mature" Hermione is an act for Snape when she invites him to her office, or if that self and the younger (more charming) self are two parts of a whole. This is not meant to be a criticism; that's just what I was left thinking about at the end of this part of your story. |
| Arabella Lee Smith 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good. You've handled the memories well, you've actually handled it all well. I look forward to more. Thank you. |
| Evelyns Journey 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuse*Bites my lip* That was really sweet and cute. Entirely within character and perfectly done. I have never read this plot before so it was refreshing. I hope you update soon! I look forward to finding out how Severus's plan's unfold. UPDATE VERY SOON! |
| Lifeasanamazon 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseOh this is delightful! I love a pentitent and sensible Snape. And your Hermione is beautifully not quite whole. |
| debjunk 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI like your story so far. Can't wait to read the end. |
| notwritten 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseNow this chapter is cool, and good. More please if your muse is working. Keep smiling. :-) |
| Murgy31 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was an awesome first chapter! I can't wait for the next one. Great Job! |
| jamy21 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI loved the first part of this. It's very unique and original, as I don't think I've ever read a story that followed a theme or plot quite like this, but I really enjoy this. I'm looking forward to the last part. |
| duj 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseNice to see you writing again :)) It was hardly surprising that he reacted with suspicion and sarcasm. Her sincere care for his welfare was probably his first experience of altruism without ulterior motives. Fortunately, he used the freedom she gave him to best extent and relearnt the trust that babies are born with. The line about "something unique about the viciousness of ex-students" is so true of his creator, isn't it? So much of HP is about punishing the teacher she modeled Snape on. Ex classmates too; Pansy's fate was a payback to the girls who used to tease her: publicly shamed and despised, and losing out in love too. |
| excessivelyperky 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseCute story. I can see Snape and Hermione acting like this, really, though Hermione should have realized from the beginning that someone treated as an expendable part by both sides is probably not going to be a people person. Nicely done! |