wow... MAYA-AELITA IS A TOTAL BITCH.and whore
who would do that? JTL good job with this totally did not see it coming looking forward to more chapters

Hi!

Wow. Franz's motive for messing with Odd was pretty unexpected. O.o

And the whole 'Maya' pretending to be Aelita bit is pretty weird.

I'm anxious to see what happens with Aelita and Jeremie.

Looking forward to more!

Until next time...

wow every chapter Maya get even more evil. I wonder if she really is working for xana. What will happen to Aelita so many twists! I love it

Wow...Twists and turns...I'm excited to see what happens. Aelita and her clone are devious.

Sweet1emy... I have 63 chapters up, so that should give you plenty for reading.

Mephisto, keep reading! You have lots of it ahead of you lol.

FT! Missed you dude. As for the ending, the Aelita in Mark's apartment was Maya. But again she is a copy, so they are Aelita. They only chose Maya so there wouldn't be as much confusion. But they see themselves, think of themselves, and are Aelita. It would be like if I made an exact copy of myself and called him Bob. He wouldn't really be Bob, think of himself as Bob, so forth but it is just what I would call him.

AOTF! But why is she? Does she really think she can trust him? Or... Mwahaha!

plz put two chapters together soon...i cant wait ...i am starting to have nightmares about the ending

such a touching ending. didnt see that one coming. lol

nice work!

Hi!

Nice chapter!

The ending has me very confused. ?_?

Yumi and William snuck into a movie theater? How naughty of them, LOL.

Yeesh, Maya and Aelita really are on hostile ground. O_O

Looking forward to future episodes!

Until next time...

...So Aelita is working with Jeremie? Interesting. Since the beginning? I doubt it, must be a recent development.

Anywho, this is a big twist. I'm excited to see where else this goes...

Hi!

Sorry that it's been a while. School kept me busy and next semester's gonna be even worse.

But I've been off for a while, so I took that time to get caught up.

As for this chapter, it's very nice.

Very curious about the circumstance regarding Aelita and Jeremie.

There certainly is some character tension going on.

Looking forward to more!

Until next time...

very nice chapter. it could use come work. but its still readable.
at the end when you mentioned odd asking sissy out on a date... now that is entertainment. lol

very nice work my friend.

good first chapter. though i think it could have been written a bit better. i hope to see improvement by the end of the really long story. lol
if you can impress me enough i may jsut give you a spot on my favorites list. lol keep up the good work

So the whole thing was a distraction? What has Jeremie done? Rebellion against XANA? Searching for Antea? Who knows...Besides you, of course.

Been awhile since I did this so...

AOTF! What is with Maya? I know of course because I am the author but you and the rest must wait!

Mad Shoe! The copy/clone thing... Well, gotta read is all I can say.

LBF! Yeah, I been sending messages to the people who review, except you don't have a profile on here. I also have been alternating between updating Cl and my TT series. So one week CL, next week TT.

Sweet1emy1! What did Maya do? Let's just say her oral presentation was perfect but not what Aelita would have done.

where r u man i've been waiting for you i don't see replys or new chapters come on now we r waiting !