Great Story! Any more to it? I love the modern take on it and you've captured the characters beautifully. I could do with a few less F words though. If there were none of them that would be best. I remember when the s word was the worst of them all.

You've done an awesome job bringing Saiyuki to the modern day. I've yet to see Jeep though ^-^. Maybe he'll appear in the next story? Perhaps the Governor could pull some more strings?

I felt like I should point this out, in chapter 11 in the first paragraph the "trail" that let out maybe should've been a trial? Most people in a court house don't go around discussing "trails" either ^-^.

I really enjoyed reading this story. It's been very interesting and hopefully the next installment will arrive soon?

Quite interesting to see the Sanzo ikkou in modern times. ^^ I almost feel sorry for them, at least the guys in the canon-verse had been prepared for crazy demon onslaught... I utterly love the way you described Hakkai in this, and Gojyo. Goku is as adorable as always. Sanzo is as amazing as always, though I feel like freaking out in his stead. I mean, he's guardian to a kid who's over 100 years old! Not something very normal in the present day world. Not that he believes it, lol...

GREAT STORY! MOER CHAPTERS SOON, I HOPE?

I didn't know what to expect when I first started reading this, but I must say I was pleasantly surprised. I loved how you tied everything together, and their descriptions as well. Everyone was kept in character too. Nice story, and I hope to see more of it in the future. :)

Welcome back but, DAMN IT! YOU NEARLY SCARED THE ** OUT OF ME WHEN I SAW THE WORD "Epilogue" I thought it was over I was about to scream at my laptop!!*smiles* But then I see the TBC and sighed with relief. Don't DO that to me, I'm too young to have a heartattack! *smiles* Can't wait to see what you have next for our four men. Till then BYE!

omg! eww it's nii! damn i hate and love that guy!! he's so so so evil and brilliant at the same time that i don't know what to think about him. anyway, yay, gojyo has his shakugo and hakkai's got his chi while sanzo activates...erm, uses the sutra and goku gets food! a happy ending for the ikkou.

lovely, i like how you combined the nasty crag shikigami (??) with the first youkai spider lady. i'd love to read what's coming up for this! XD

More please!!

please updates quiro know what happened to Goku Please !.
certainly very interesting your fic, many congratulations.
Mexican estpy what I'm reading through the google translator.

you updated!! yay!!

Oh...a little bit of Cindy x Gojyo happening? Cindy should've just used that gun...but then again, she probably would've seriously shot Gojyo...and Gato!! He appeared!! Not Yakumo like I thought...xD...is Gato going to die, and Hazel revive him? ...then Hazel gets a loyal undead slave to do all the work for him...=.=

No!! Goku!! He protects Sanzo...so sweet...but so reversed!! Sanzo, take care of the kid!! But then again...Goku is older...by a few centuries... Heheh, Sanzo keeps a fan in his jacket...btw, is he still wearing the weird paper scarf?

Wouldn't it be funny if Gojyo unfolded Sanzo's fan and found it to be his paper scarf...O.o

Update soon!!

i knew it was gat, but then where's hazel? not that i mind he's not here yet, there's just something about him that just makes me want to bash his face into the closest solid surface. and i'm not even a violent person, honest! lol, anyway, thank the gods that hakkai came back to save them, and that gat saved goyjo. what next? this first mission turned out harder than anyone expected. looking forward to more! XD

WHOO! (glomps Gat) I should have seen that coming! But wait... Where there's a Gat, a Hazel is sure to follow... Or not? Well, either way, the chapter was kick-**.

More please!

Have to say, this is a good chapter. I love action scene's that are well-written. :)

I worship this. Truely awesome. And the hakkai being confused about the chi thing was well thought out. Actually, how does he discover his energy-blast/barrier/healing thing in the real one? Cause all I can remember is him saying something about not being sure it would work.