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| Jac Danvers 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written, with just the right amount of detail and emotion. Great job! |
| not dead yet 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseloved it |
| chocoluvr 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseGood chapter in showing how Tonks and Remus react to Mad Eye's death. |
| xLupinxLoverx 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseWith such a fantastic bribe, how could I not review? A wonderfully written piece. Your descriptions are flawless and your characters are perfectly portrayed. I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I'm off to read the sequel! |
| Nvrmore 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseHey there. I'm sorry, I've fallen out of the habit of reading fanfiction, so I never did catch up on your stories. But I desprately needed a distraction today and I got the notice for 'Once' which, of course then I had to read it's prequel. And I am again reminded why you're such a wonderful author - one of the best on here, I think. Thanks for a wonderfully caring story, and I love that it's in the context of marriage. You've conveyed the feelings of carrying on, need, love, loss, frustration - all beautifully and with reverence. Nicely done. Thank you. |
| the-original-hufflepuff 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseWith a bribe like that, who could resist reviewing? I don't know how I missed this piece in the ficathon. It's stunning, as always your characterisations are absolutely perfect: I so want to steal your Remus! I'm looking forward to the next chapter of Caring for Magical Creatures...hint, hint ;). |
| Pyric 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI miss these wonderful pieces you write. Contented sigh. Nicely done, as always. My deepest and most sincere respects for you and your exceptional work. |
| Animekitty47 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseYou said you'd update in a few days, so you're getting the flamethrower if you don't! Happy Belated Easter to you too! *polishes flamethower* |
| AmazingBouncingFerret445 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseoh my! the transition between grief and romance is surprisingly flawless...i wasnt even expecting that (i forgot to look at the rating/genre) but it all fits in nicely together. really well done :D i cant wait for the sequel. |
| AudioAesthetic 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseYou have excellent characterization of Tonks (her grief and seriousness did not replace her clumsiness and overall geniality) and of Remus (who is always serious, isn't he?). It was wonderful, and made me love this pairing even more, if that's possible. Well done! |
| lilJunebug 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseGood job! |
| Glorious Clio 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAs always, your story left me breathless. Thank you. The characterization was pitch perfect, and the story itself would fit perfectly within the book. Cheers! And yes, I think I will borrow Remus for a bit... |
| ishandtwofourths 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseyay, new fic! and a posting right before i have to go to classes for the day... what a nice thing to wake up to. now, let's see if i can set a record for speed-reviewing and churn something out before i have to leave, eh? ;) so. as usual, lovely stuff... well, lovely in a sad way though. poor mad-eye. i really did like him - his death prompted the first of many tears when i read DH. at least, i think they did - it's sorta hard to remember now, and frankly, i haven't touched the book since, lol. but i greatly enjoyed reading fics about a tonks/moody mentorish relationship even before we learned she actually WAS his protegee, so naturally her reaction to his death would be essential, and you captured it really well here. i think tonks would think that moody would want her to stay strong and constantly vigiliant, so that soldiering on she does really seems spot on. but of course, a bit of comfort is a necessity as well. it was indeed a night full of close shaves for remus and tonks, so who could begrudge them a little comfort? a little showery comfort! ooh la la. *fans herself* i really can't wait to see where this goes... here's hoping for more soon! :) |