Wow. I dont know if you still go to but I thought this fic is really worth a review.

You write beautifully. Im not even overly interested in the pairing, but youre writing captures ever shipper, I darasay.

I especially loved hear, feel and saturday. But, everything was perfect, of course.

Very, very nice! You know, I usually don't read fluff, but, for some reason, I became a sucker for NL fluff. xD

This was so sweet, nicely written. I agree with a reviewer before me, it was so very simple, yet beautiful.

Nice job, I like how you used the sentences. Luna and Neville are so cute.

aww this was so cute!

:D

I liked this, so heartbreaking.

Oh, so sweet! Was the thimble an allusion to Peter Pan? And... you had him leave her? *sniffle* YOU HAD HIM GO WITH HANNAH? *sobs in corner* You terrible person who plays my emotions like harp strings! But wow, that was.. fantastic.

-SMARTALIENQT :)

This was the cutest, sweetest, warmest, cosiest fic I've ever read! I like Neville A LOT. As for Luna... I just love her too much for my own good. So this pairing is perfect for me. And for some strange, stupid reason, I think it's better when it ends with him marrying Hannah and her marrying Rolf, but both never forgetting what they've shared; which is a VERY special thing indeed. I just love their chemistry, I sometimes can'T help but wnat Neville to cheat on her wife with Luna! LOL. Beautiful writing, you're perfect at L/N, you should try writing more about them!

All the best...

fantastic! why did he have to marry Hannah? *sob*

I loved it! Oh it was so sad you almost had me in tears. I loved how you wrote it.

This was beyond adorable, Pinky. The ending was so heartbreaking for me, that he chose Hannah over Luna. Brilliant twist though! :D

Adorable! I love the little Peter Pan reference. It's so Luna to place a thimble/kiss in Neville's hand and then give Neville a kiss/thimble.

Keep up the good work!

Aw, that was sweet! I love your characterization of Neville. :)

There were a few mistakes:

[He quietly followed her, as she slowly crept out of Hagrid’s Hut...]

There shouldn't be a comma after "her."

[Her silver blonde hair...]

It should be "silvery-blonde."

[...his grandmother was a very kind woman but Neville didn’t feel so much at home.]

You need a comma after "woman" because you have to full sentences.

[He blocked the thought of home out of his head, and turned his gaze to her once more.]

You don't need the comma after "head."

And I think a couple more things needed fixing, but I'm too lazy to go back through and look for them.

Your sentences in this fic seemed really choppy; whether or not this was for stylistic purposes or not I can't tell. This wasn't my favorite of your fics, I guess because it didn't really seem to flow too much.

I really liked the part near the end where he ended up with Hannah. The canon ending was beautiful, and his asking for forgiveness was heartbreaking. Nice job!

-Kyota

This was lovely. I especially liked the taste one, it was really cute and Luna-ish ] I'm not sure is fragilely is a word, but correct me if I'm wrong! Really good job overall.

Wait - you made him end up with Hannah? How could you? *sobs* It was beautiful! They would have been perfect! *cries more*

Okay, I'm joking. XD I loved this, and it was incredibly well written - however I just wished he hadn't ended up with Hannah. *shrugs* But hey, I'm not the author.

Keep Writing!

I love how you've captured Neville and Luna, great job.