i hopr u were serious about sesshoumaru comin back hehehehehehe and add naraku and have him say something around "wtf happened to the miko and whos this brod" or something like that XD lol

I CHOOSE SESSHOUMARU hes awsome lol please finish the story and have him say something about kagome being a hanyou or something like that

I love this story! PLEASE update really soon, cause I'm really interested in how Kagome and Inuyasha are going to deal with Kagome turning into a full hald demon form... So, in conclusion, UPDATE SOON! Yay! you killed Kikyou with a frying pan!

needless to say, I liked this story the BEST outta of all yours! and that's saying plenty...

oh plz make this a sess/kags fic... or some very very odd pairing... i like them too!

hint:- for instant laughs, try, kagome a perv. with jaktosu... god i love that guy... i mean if you can pair her with naraku (yes, i agree he IS hot).. jakotsu is awesome! especially if she had to convince him to be amn first.. THEN fall in love with her...hehe...

and yeah, kags was a bit harsh... poor inu..

and another thing I've been curious about, most of your inuyash stories dont fit with your pen name at all...Ah well. shucks. kags looks good with everyone.. amazing isnt it? the one i think she looks dispiciable with is..(not naraku) but... JAKEN! or like mutotsu poison master...

shes quite compitible...

update soon!

Well Inu took it a lot better than I thought he would. Wonder what's going through his mind right now. Is he thinking that Kag is better than Kikyo now that she's hanyou like him? Will he make his move to claim her as his before someone else... say Koga or Fluffy beat him to it? Does he have any feelings for Kag at all or are they hidden deep within his gruff exterior? I predict that either the great and terrible Fluffy-sama shows up or the handsome blue eyes wolf price Koga shows up, just to bait Inu and make Kag their mate. Thanks for the update... looking forward to more of this fic and the hysterics to ensue.

I'm rather surprised that Inu hasn't smelled her demonic heritage before now. Maybe his nose is broke... after all the 'sit' commands that she's given him since the necklace was put upon his neck. I love how you've described her clothes as well as the blade of her sword. Does it have a name? Will it have any special techniques like tetsusigua? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Make them wake up to Kouga cause none of them really want or not want him around... well except InuYasha

Not bad, not bad at all. I like the idea of a story within the story, kind of like Shakespeare's play within a play for 'Hamlet.' I'd just like to get some clarification, this part is set in the Feudal Era correct? Just wanted to make sure of the time frames and setting is all. I'm not against new characters that authors write about, I've got two of my own, as well as a few other authors that I know as well. I like the fact that you also put a list of new words that you've used at the bottom so that others know what you are talking about, not many do that and for the first timers who read Japanese may not know, but that helps. Good job. Looking forward to more from this story.

Ok, first of all, i'd just like to point out u spelled Kikyou's name wrong...unless you did that on purpose. It looks funny to read though. That paragraph where they're talking to Inuyasha was sorta confusing though. Um...oh yah and i hate it when ppl call Kikyou a clay pot cuz it wasn't exactly her choice...not my point...i more just hate bashing any of the characters cuz they're all unique in their own way but im getting beside the point. i liked it so far but u need to touch up on your spelling and grammar. that's all! :)