Reviews for Twenty Minutes

sprntrl grl 2008-04-07 ch 1,	abuseI really, really, liked this - especially the insight into Derek's past - er, future - and after J-Day.
C.Isaac 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abuseI saw this also as a link from Television Without Pity originally, and I thought it was excellent. It feels as contemplative as the 20 minutes the character spent brushing his teeth. Thanks for the story!
Chris 2008-04-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseA very nice additional scene - vague (and so won't likely be contradicted by the show), and in-character. Well done!
todrownandburn 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abusewow i loved this please write more for Derek! You are amazing at it ! Keep writing!
dakota423 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseoh. Nice. Very interesting choice to write on, but an excellent vingette never the less. I love the part where Derek is telling Kyle to brush his teeth. Such compassion for one another. Very sweet. And nice twist at the end. Looking forward to more from you on TSCC.
HeroesBonesSNPB 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abusewow!! that was a very nice fic!! :D :P
Metroid13 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseSaw this on Television without Pity when it was initially being praised. Thought it was good then, and I still do. Well done.
Livy1213 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseHee! I love this story so much. Derek is pitch perfect and in character. Please write more of him!