Well, I think that's pretty incredible. some of your lines were breathtaking.

ohh...pretty. I like. Yeah. It flows really well.

A really good poem. Really enjoyed it.

Yes, i want be smothered too, but you, my dear authors, you and your chums don't let me rest lately... well done, my friend, you come back to the kingdom of poetry, and very good poetry, i dare say this is your best work (in poetry, and by now) Congratulations.

ah...i've told you i love your poetry, right? and a clever word as well, though it is rather...rough and non-final, whereas the rest of the piece is delicate and precise. but excellent work; a perfect depiction of our two heroes

Very cool! I never even thought of making it be a poem! Nicely done.

That last line . . . "God-fashioned bulwark" is just so perfect in describing Holmes and Watson. Nice.

LOVELY.
You did very nicely with it~

I think I'M the only one that HASN'T done the 221B thing yet. xDD

How beautiful!

WOT! Take a bow violet! That was beautiful and chilling. *shivers* well done.

The imagery in that was amazing - and I must say it brought a lump to my throat and a tear to my eye. Beautifully said in so few words. Very well done!

Good heavens, girl, that's flipping AWESOME! I LOVE IT! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
I think I shall now hang up my poetry awards in discouragement...this was simply gorgeous! Well done indeed!

'Sometimes side by side,
More often back to back,'

- I love those lines especially - they're just perfect. The whole thing was perfect! WOOHOO! Mind if I add it to the C2 Community?