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| Barclay 2008-08-08 ch 1,  | abuseI like your story. Good idea to continue that scene. Especially given that we left Marion leaning over a sleeping Indy, but the next morning she had to retrieve her dress/nightgown from the headboard of the bed... Clearly something happened that we were never shown... |
| davegrohlobsessive 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseSuperb! I love it. (: You should continue it. You're very talented. |
| MuchTooHighACost 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseYes. Yes. Yes. Yes! This was amazing and so in character it wasn't even funny! Great job! |
| the doctor's next dance 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseOh, I loved that! Great fic, and a great end ;D |
| HanSolosGal 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseHey vegemite! Remember me?! :D I happened to stumble upon this fic, and I loved it. I LOVE this scene in the movie. It's so ironic that you were the one that wrote it too. :] Also, oddly enough, I just wrote a fic continuing this scene too- except they actually get to the sexin', har har. /s/4290361/1/A_Break, if you want to read. Keep up the good work. You should continue this- I really like the way you wrote it. :) |
| Haiden 2008-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou should continue this story its really good |
| crzysheelf 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseWow, great job! You made it both sentimental and sweet, but not sugary so. Very in character! |
| FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.... 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseAw, poor Marion. He's just so irresistible, it's a shame that she's so hurt. Though it's definitely good that she's willing to backtrack a bit! I mean, how else could we have Mutt in KOTCS? |
| hansolofan 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abusereally really good! i think you captured the feelings of both marion and indy at that time really well. keep writing! |
| tausendSterne 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet, little story! I like your style of writing a lot, its very expressive. Great! |
| Terriah 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseha ha very good! x |
| tanith75 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome!! Can't wait to see them in the new movie!! |
| Canyon 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, fantastic story. I hope you write more ;-) |
| MrsO'HaraHamiltonKennedyBut... 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was real sweet. I like your story alot. Nice work! |
| Sonja 2008-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow great! I really wish this had been in the movie. I like that we get some of Marion's backstory and that Indy seems like less of a jerk because he actually apologizes without saying something snotty like, "I can only say I'm sorry so many times." Well done! |