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White Wyrsa
2009-10-12 . chapter 13
Holmes is kind soul.
Well done answer to challenge! Would love to see more!
White Wyrsa
2009-10-12 . chapter 11
AW, cute! *gg* Whatever life heaps upon them, thay manage. ))
White Wyrsa
2009-10-12 . chapter 8
*gg* I waved those mental images away. Frantically. *gg* Poor Holmses, that was harsh crucifixion you made up for them.
White Wyrsa
2009-10-12 . chapter 6
Hey! *laugh* Grnine trick! My mind is muddled with it fivever now!
Tristan-the-Dreamer
2009-04-08 . chapter 10
This made me squee AND laugh. "Yes, it makes you the more qualified." XD For some reason Holmes calling it, "the little babe" is so cute to me...awawaw...
It's hilarious how they hop around actually mentioning what the baby has "done." XD
Account Not Found
2009-03-15 . chapter 10
Haha! Anymore on the baby? I hope so...
Account Not Found
2009-03-15 . chapter 6
Haha! Victor Borge? AWESOME! Oh yeah, in the first line or so, it says

"She had come over to visit,"

Maybe it should've been 'she had come over three visit'?

Anyways, very funny. I liked it!
reflekshun
2009-03-11 . chapter 13
That was so cute! I love the sweet ending. Thanks a lot for sharing.
Pompey
2009-03-10 . chapter 13
(giggle) Having lived in 4-person dorm for a couple years, there were a couple similar incidents.

ouchie though.
AmatorLinguae
2009-03-10 . chapter 13
Hilarious! Poor Holmes never can let down his guard, can he?
KCS
2009-03-10 . chapter 13
Aw, poor Holmes. Teehee. :D
bcbdrums
2009-03-09 . chapter 13
you know, i'm not surprised...XD silly boys.

i like the interaction between them...you write it very naturally.
reflekshun
2009-03-03 . chapter 12
There is another one that could be fleshed out and would make a good read. Thanks for sharing.
reflekshun
2009-03-03 . chapter 8
YOU can rock me to sleep tonight. Seriously, it was a cute ficlet. Thanks again. You know, this might make the bones of a good story. Who knows where it would lead if it were fleshed out a little...and it IS really cute...
reflekshun
2009-03-03 . chapter 7
That was a good story, you made it suspenseful. Thank you for sharing.
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