Reviews for Closer to the Heart

Reviews For: Closer to the Heart

angel baby 2008-06-24 ch 3, anon.	abuseaw, fluffy. Keep writing!
Mage the Observer 2008-05-30 ch 3,	abuseAnd so the first cracks appear in Gotz's armor. Good work, as always, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
kelley28 2008-04-25 ch 2,	abuseAwesome! Gotz and Ann is a great idea and I hope the "romance" means that they end up together.
The-Music-of-hands 2008-04-24 ch 2,	abuseFantastic! A wonderful job, I must have more, more I say. You portray the characters wonderfully and as I could see, there weren't any mistakes. You did a fantastically wonderful job, and I simply cannot wait until the next chapter, but I must have patience. You, take your time :) TMoh
Mage the Observer 2008-04-23 ch 2,	abuseVery nice chapter here. If I could make a slight editing suggestion though, 'Show up whenever you want' would flow better than 'Arrive whenever you want.' Looking forward to the next chapter.
Pause11 2008-04-23 ch 2,	abuseI don't get it... Somebody decides to be really nice and just come right in and clean your house!? ...I wish that were true. :P Once again (and possibly again), Good Job Libra! ^_^
sunni 2008-04-04 ch 1, anon.	abuselol! luv it hun! wierd pairing but i guess i have 2 see where this goes. good job.
Baby bear 2008-04-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell I have to say this first chapter was awesome you did a great job.I just hope this is one of those cute friendship stories and nothing else.I would hate to find out this was meant to be a love story cause that's just wrong considering it's Gotz and Ann. I like cute bonding and friendship stories where people use friendship to bring out the good in a character.Like Ann befriending Gotz to help make him enjoy the memories of the ones he loved and encouraging him to get out and enjoy his life now even though his wife and kid are gone does not mean he can't make the best of his life in honor of their memory cause wouldn't his wife and daughter want him to enjoy his life despite them being gone.Like how Ann loved her Mom and enjoys remembering her and everything she meant to her I even her she suggests people at the cafe to try her Mom's favorite dishes on her mother's birth day in honor of her. Anyway great chapter hope the next one is equally good if not better.Later.
Pause11 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseWow, Libra. I really enjoyed this new story of yours. You did a superb job on the wording and such. Can't wait to see the next chapter. -Pause
Mage the Observer 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseNice start here, Gotz's loner attitude definitely seems accurate, as well as the caffeine addiction. "Forget the self-imposed exile, I need CAFFEINE!!"
Chicken Yuki~ Human Reviewe... 2008-04-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseIT'S YOU! THE CRYING POPURI DRAWING GUY! I should really get myself a deviantart account and do my proper conduct there, eh? Right, back to business. I actually looked into this because the premise is interesting. It's certainly a very, very, VERY unique pairing. And I like daring, different ideas at times. Although, I'll have to be upfront: I despise Ann. She's one of my least favorite HM girls of all time, for not-so-apparent reasons, but don't despair as I have no wish disrespect this piece and mindlessly bash the crap outta her in a non-parodic way. Actually, this bit alone must be saying you did something right if you grabbed my attention and I'm reviewing... So why am I here? Simple. It's not to be an inane distraction. The writing is quite good. You've captured Gotz' past and personality nicely here. He's that jerk with a potential heart of gold type, and he's full of thought... even if it isn't all pleasant. You've even got characteristics of the other guys. So all in all, an interesting style. But... might I actually stick around to read the rest? I dunno, we'll see. But know that you're writing, regardless, is good. Have fun writing, and welcome.
The-Music-of-hands 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseYou surely must continue this to the end. Brilliant I say, brilliant. Bravo, no angst and you have me hooked on the first chapter. No mistakes as far as I can see, you put this together rather well, and their personality's were spot on. Great job. TMoh
StarrNight 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseHee! I like it! Never would have put Gotz and Ann together, but, hey, if the shoe fits... I'm gonna another few chapters to decided completely. Good job!

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