Wow! Great first chapter! It was well worded and had good details. I just know this is going to be an amazing story, do update soon! :D!

I really, really liked the first chapter...

Just a few scenes in, and I already have a feel for Roxas, Hayner and Olette. I just wonder what'll be like on Namine's side. Keep up the great work!

Until next time, later!

I love this story so far! It was a very good starter chapter. It really makes me want to continue and see what happens next. So I hope you have fun writing this and to please post the next entry soon! Good luck! o

o this is good

cant wait to see were namine comes in

yay cant wait 4 da update

i liked it! can't wait for your next update:]

BlueFox

Huh, well, I think this looks pretty good so far! Can't wait to get deeper into it.

Awesome! I love the story idea! Keep up the good work, and Update!

I really, really, really like this story so far. PLEASE UPDATE! when will Namine come in? soo, please...update?

I really like the beginning! Great start! Nice description! Also can't wait to see their meeting:)

Wow, that was awesome! I can't wait for more! Please update asap!

utterly and copmletely interested! I'm hooked, what can I say! This will definately be an interesting story... Very interesting! I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter... really I am, this is excillent so far!

Lol, grocery shopping... That is so random. I wonder how in the world he'll meet Namine. This will be cute though, I know it...

Please update soon, and maybe I can give you better feedback on the second chapter... Sorry, I usually don't have lots to say about the beginning chapter...!

I hope it's definately soon you update this good grief!

-zesty- :)