|Reviews for Melanin|
| regenerate 4/20/08 . chapter 1
hard core laughing right hurr.
'He didn’t mean it in that whole stupid-socially-and-romantically-retarded-Sasuke-w ho-loves-Sakura sort of way—not that kind of annoying. Hells no! He meant in the whole oh-my-god-will-you-just-shut-the-hell-up-now-befor e-I-slit-my-own-throat sort of annoying.'
gosh, you kinda spew it out
lyke crazy, dood.
i heart it.
i really do.
i love crack, it's mind-defying,
very pretty, very unique-feelgood-
just kidding, srsly.
Lol. This is awesome.
And this is why I read your stuff.
Go beyond the norm, man.
| Madam Grey 4/16/08 . chapter 1
Lol, this fic is so great xD I loved Naruto's inner turmoil and the idea of him liking girls like his mother ;) on some level... it was cute that he was so annoyed xD and then took a 180 degree turn. Hehe, thanks for sating my NaruKa craving D
| yellowbead 4/8/08 . chapter 1
NEW OTP PLZ
| this account is dead sorry 4/5/08 . chapter 1
I would prefer this pairing over sasukarin anyday D
Naruto and his secret fetish for red heads, we all should've known.
| AGENT Kuma-chan 4/3/08 . chapter 1
Heh. (I love these crack couples...)
I love the whole Karin/Naruto idea. Where did you get it from? So...random.
But nice. Very nice. And yet again, you capture Naruto's character...beause it is just like Naruto to get annoyed by the one he has fallen for (...in the heat of battle too. VERY like Naruto.)
Probably because she's very similar to him anyways...
*sigh* FFN has not as yet fixed itself. (Why must they take away all the good things?)
| InsomniacNarutoReader 4/2/08 . chapter 1
haha...i didn't think anyone would ever write a narukarin story its so completely random but you make it so good
| The Loser Lord 4/2/08 . chapter 1
Pink is a shade of red, huh?
I agree. Only cuz in kindergarten, kids were too cheap to use actual pink crayons. Just red.
Naruto and Karin? Unheard of. Haha. Way to think outside the box :]
| WhatDoYouMeanI'mDrunk 4/2/08 . chapter 1
hope this might be more than a one-shot!
| Tatacolt 4/2/08 . chapter 1
It's kinda cool... surprisingly, never considered such a pairing. The observation on men/fathers and women/mothers aspect is cute. Thanks
| SunnyHinata 4/2/08 . chapter 1
Strange...NaruKarin..Never ever read one of those before. My grin couldn't get any bigger.:D
| Affinitive 4/2/08 . chapter 1
This was amazing. Definitely not what I expected, but all the more enjoyable.
| Annie Sparklecakes 4/2/08 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD YOU WROTE IT. Already. Instead of updating.
You're a LOSER.
Dude. I don't even know. This pairing disturbs me somehow, but the story was so Naruto, I loved it. So good job. D
| Sony89 4/2/08 . chapter 1
But the fic is good :)
| MiKe2vIcIoUs 4/2/08 . chapter 1
eh, makes sense. I heard that before but I refuse to believe it. My mom annoys the shits out of me... And if it's true, and I'm attracted to women like my mother, I'll be in the same boat as Naruto. Attracted to loud, annoying, and overly emotional women with red hair. I swear on the Dallas Cowboys, I'm going to try my best to stay out of that ocean.
But anyway, great stuff. Gave me a chuckle, and a new way to look at things.
| SpillietehInkie 4/2/08 . chapter 1
cute. different. love it. XD