Aww man, that was sweet. Must get back to writing Collide! *scrabbles* Eep!
I loved the paragraph describing his need to get away. "The young, talented, sweet, sincere mech that everyone seemed to overlook" -- *squees and falls over* Just precious!
aw! that was so sweet! Leave to Flight to find such a great spot and to share it with his lover... just goes to show how much he loves that Wrecker. And I love how Sandstorm was so concerned about Flight's safety...
um,
...or getting involved with the Arielbot; (Aerialbot)
... how easy would it be (for them) to take advantage of him, to hurt him...?
...Sandstorm chose to ignore these thoughts. ("those" would probably sound better)
...meh...sorry I can be OC about these sort of things... Just remember, I love this story! Can't wait for more!