cool story. can you please not kill pat? He is not an ass and shouldnt have to die.

I never had time to write a review...so... I LOVE THIS FIC! TSUKASA(Pat), IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS!

Well done and beautifully written! I really enjoyed reading this, and you did a good job with Tsukasa and Hikaru's interactions. I'd love to read an epilouge if you plan to write it. I'll keep my eye out for it.

I'd like one! I'd like one! I'D LIKE ONE!

The voices in my head are demanding me to ask you to write one. This fic was awesome!

It can't be over! I really hope you come back to this soon! It's an amazing fic!

I hope you decide to continue. Maybe you can show what might of happened during Tribe. Just a suggestion.

This is great!

The descriptions you used were very in depth and detailed, I could really picture what was going on.

I loved it!

That was amazing! I loved every bit of it. MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE-Oh, darn it, it's over.

Ai! Awesome, awesome chapter! I love it! It's just... awesome. (Hikaru's a lot like Dark Rock, ne? XD) I really hope you write an epilouge sometime. Anyway, good chapter.

Oh, wow, I love it! You're very good at writing! I love how you portray Hikaru. Poor Tsukasa-kun...

Another good chapter, desu (Hikaru's MEAN! T.T Poor Tsukasa-chan...)

It's interesting how in here, Hikaru is White Gemini, while in the games he's Black Gemini (And Tsukasa is White Gemini). It's also really neat to she how your Hikaru is both like and unlike the games one. Good job!

Poor Tsukasa-kun... Oh, another great chapter!

YAY! I bet I know who it is... I won't say anything, though, so I won't spoil anything. Awesone as usual!

I love this. :D You portray Tsukasa's confusion and powerlessness perfectly. And I also like your portrayal of Gemini. You capture their ambiguous malace excellently. And this is definitely a good cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what happens next! :) *faves*

Oh, very nice

Cliffhanger!

Oh, that's so mean...

I enjoy reading these. Please continue!