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Reviews For: Did I Hear You Say This Was Victory?

Lost Again
2008-07-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseI liked this one shot. It never does explain what happens to the winners when they go back. In some ways it would be a danger to let them back out into society. I wouldn't mind seeing this idea expanded. How would fmaily and friends, ones in other classes, deal with the winner? How would the winner deal with life? I could see it going two ways. Either sucide because of what he or she has done or living because they need to live for everyone else. Keep writing.
Niamhako
2008-06-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is great. It's just so...chilling. Instant faves.
Jenizaki
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseGREAT STORY!!

I like the ambiguity of it all. Good job, I wish I could write like this :)
excessivelyperky
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseWow. This is incredible. Yes, we need to know the cost of any kind of war. Very well done.
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