Oh . . . my. XD LOL! Takumi . . . the woman. Hilarious. What an entertaining, strange, and bizarrely fascinating idea. But I guess, if you're gonna write a story, why not write one that's gonna blow everyone's mind? XD In one way or another. Awesome job with this! I absolutely enjoyed reading it.

Hilarious! Please update and post the next chapter. I want to see what happens with ryousuke and keisuke now that they know.

mwahhahaha..nice idea..and dead funny but i'd appreciate if there're more details/events and are you sure this's complete?? where's the ryotaku pair i'm supposed to see?

haha... i love it! love it! love it!
crazy idea to make takumi a girl... cant imagine how it would be like to watch it as the real anime... but who cares as long as i can watch ryosuke and takumi being together... rite?
anyway please keep updating... looking forward to reading it again... its really different from the rest i should say...
Erm... did i say that i love it?

Nice story! Interesting.

Um... I hope I don't flame right now, but I want to tell you that you should improve your grammar. It is a little confusing for the reader. Like when you are trying to do that (comic) effect with "he-she" you should and least put a line when you write it.(or something like that ^_^; hope I didn't confuse you, *not an English speaker*) Example: You wrote "it seemed wrong to hiher to approach" It would be better if you wrote it something like this: "wrong to hi-her to..." and so on and so forth. BTW be careful with the spaces.

And another thing. When you switch POVs it would be better if you said it rather than what you use ("x"). Like I said It's a bit confusing. Like this:

"Unfortunately, Takumi's luck had run out.

"Hello miss, you seem familiar. Have we met before?" Ryousuke-san asked her flat out.

I'd rather face a sheer drop on a mountain pass than this

Panicking, she let out a squeak.

Keisuke's P.O.V.

"Hello miss, you seem familiar. Have we met before?" Ryousuke had beaten Keisuke to the punch asking the question he wanted to ask.

She's also familiar to Ryousuke? We might have met her somewhere before and what's with Ryousuke?"

Well I hope you will write more. It seems interesting. Keep it up!