Reviews for summer dawning

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Philyra 2008-07-22 ch 1,	abuseI love all four of these stories that you've written. You've really filled out the ambiguous scenes and shown some insight into Nicky's character. Great job.
FreeDaChickens 2008-07-12 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely love this series. The emotion you've put into it and the complexity of their characters and backstory is simply amazing. There are a couple little grammar mistakes, but overall it's very well-written. Lovely! :)
HiSaShUu 2008-06-16 ch 1,	abuseI can't understand why you are not happy with this ending... it's totally amazing, it fits, it's perfect. Along with the other three fics. I like how you described her feelings, and his too in this one, well.. Great. I loved it.
saffireyes 2008-06-11 ch 1,	abuseWow... I'm blown away... The ending almost brought me to tears. This is possibly the most accurate story of David and Nicky I'll ever find, thanks so much for writing this! You've got amazing talent.
Badr 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abuseHmm...I feel like the relationship is the most believeable here, at the end (and the beginning, I suppose). The small details are what work best, are most convincing: the time they spend in the car, where she wonders when he'll realize she would know the most about him and his old life; the "two creams, one sugar"; when she finally understands he can't give her what she wants; waiting for David to save her, as instructed, in Tangiers; Jason's musings about her, watching her dye her hair (I love the description of Marie, as an aside); the folder she leaves him. They're all great. All in all, even though I still don't quite buy the Jason/Nikki ship in general, you've done the two characters justice with these four fics. I'll be watching for new stories from you. Keep up the good work, and feel free to message me if you have any questions or comments, if you want to defend your fics or have me explain anything I said in greater detail, etc.
angeloneous 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abusewow. what a wonderful series! Thank you so much for sharing!
Ze'eva Shacklebolt 2008-04-17 ch 1,	abuseAw, that's so sweet and very well written but I hope you don't mind if I nit-pick. Just two little things: a) She says "it was difficult for me" not "it was hard for me" and b) on the note with the file she leaves it should be your not you're. Thanks and good job, ~Ze'eva
Elliesmeow 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseI loved that! I love that she was strong enough to let him go and that he saw it as it happened. I love that they both thought about Marie and that even now she hasn't been forgotten. It would be just as wrong as if Jason left Nicky in the past all alone. I'm so glad he came and found her. I appreciate that things will still be hard for them but at least now they have hope, and each other to get them through. I think it was all so perfectly in character and thank you for writing this. Simply beautiful. -Ellie
mhx3 2008-04-05 ch 1,	abuseOh. My. God. That was absolutely amazing. I just read all four parts...and all I can honestly say is that you practically had me in tears. Seriously, your writing is beautiful. This is without a doubt my favorite Bourne fic. Excellent job. I only wish this was how the movie ended.
texamich 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseNot a jason/nicky fan, but by this final story in your quartet, you had me. Your symbolism is nice and your writing became more fluid over the series. Nice job.
Mishelle20 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abuseThis was a great fic, I loved the ending and the entire series is AMAZING!
KrisEleven 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely beautiful. Thank you. KrisEleven~
neo-laydee 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseit was the sweetest ending! I love your stories. Pls keep writing!
indescribablyBee 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abusei have serious tears in my eyes right now. this was such a cool idea. i've been coming home from school everyday now to a new little story, and it's made my day. really, really incredible. Bee :)
mary-v 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseWell, that had me crying a bit. Fantastic.

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