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Mel
2004-08-29
ch 9, anon.
abuseHi! The story is great, occasionally a little disjointed but good characters. gives me something to tide me over. I wish they'd make more of that show.
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Kristen00
2004-07-21
ch 9,
abuseI thought it was really good and I think you were true to the original story line. Well done :)

2003-11-07
ch 9, anon.
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kerry-f84
2002-10-16
ch 2,
abuseI really enjoyed this story, great job, although at times it took me awhile to figure out what was going on, but i did like the story alot.
Kath
2002-05-26
ch 9, anon.
abuseI really enjoyed this story! The Buck women are more powerful, eh? Love it! Just enough action and suspense. Thanks for sharing!
Darqstar
2002-01-16
ch 9,
abuseForgive me if this is a little harsh... the story itself is excellent with a lot of promise, but you need to work a bit on your naration. You write very strong, very good dialoge, but too often, it ends up with folks just talking to each other and no clue of what's really going on. People don't just say things. They sit, they stretch, they sigh. Again, forgive me if this sounds harsh. I'm only saying it, because I think with a little work, this story could be excellent.
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