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csifan2694 2008-06-16 ch 4,	abusei lo0ved it
sniper babe 2008-06-05 ch 4,	abusethx for pursuing my request!! i love the ending and the cool thing about this story is that i could see the whole thing playing through my mind!! lmao!! it was fantastic!! thank you and send me a link or somthin to my email if you have any more stories cuz id love to hear them! my email is
sarapals with past50 2008-06-03 ch 4,	abuseThis one is priceless! I am laughing, I read it outloud to my mom and grandma and they are laughing! Thanks so much for writing this one. You've got good humor talent!
SARA SIDLE GRISSOM 08 2008-05-30 ch 4,	abuseHoly Freeking Smokes this was GREAT
theyHAUNTme 2008-05-28 ch 4,	abuseAww, cute epilogue! Thanks so much for adding it! Why did Grissom agree to name their first born son after him? Anyways, great chapter!
jade40 2008-05-28 ch 4,	abusei like the end! loved it, was Greg bluffing i think he was!
ishotsherlock 2008-05-28 ch 4,	abuseOh this was such a funny story, just read it all again and now my sides hurt cause all the laughing. ccant wait for your next story. AKE :D
CSI-kirsty 2008-05-28 ch 4,	abuseawesome! love it! great ending...and it did make me simle and laugh quiet frequently! lol :D
BrookeGreene 2008-05-27 ch 4,	abuseEr.. I can't say I know that particular feeling... I have a question for you though. You don't actually HAVE four 'little black dresses' do you? LOL. B/c that would be slightly excessive... (but I think/ am hoping that you only meant that every girl/ you need four..?) Hmm, and I think I'm the only person who rambles on for this long about your A/Ns. And then I end up not actually saying so much about the story. It should probably be the other way around, eh? Anyways. I agree with Sara that Gil's concern MIGHT have had SOMETHING to do with the fact that her eyes were wide and her mouth was hanging open.. it really just might have. And hey, what if they never have a son? They could have a daughter(s), or not have kids at all. Then Greg will get ripped off. Not that anyone would really feel sorry for him. And uh, you've at least made me smile, I can't remember, did I laugh as well? I'm sure I would've told you already if I had. Off to listen to some Marvin Gaye, just as you ordered me to.
shiva 2008-05-27 ch 4, anon.	abuseHi loved this story it is so nice to read something that makes me smile! Keep up the good work all GSR fans need the escape of a happy ever after 'cos it looks like TPTB are not going to give us one (RATS!) Shiva
jirrG 2008-05-27 ch 4,	abuseIt made my day! Great, as usual. I could not stop laughing, specially during chapter 3, I could not even breath. And yes, if she would've strangled Greg, for sure she was going to be convicted. Keeping the secret "emotionally draining"? Naming their first baby after him?? He's crazy. Very well done. Thanks for sharing.
urabadinfluence 2008-05-27 ch 4,	abuseVERY cute! I love the use of some older songs in this. It really brought back some good memories (but none of starting a house on fire)
Neelloc12 2008-05-27 ch 4, anon.	abuseI KNEW he was gonna ask them to name their firstborn son after him. As I was reading along I'm thinking "oh come out with it Greg, you want them to name their baby after you don't ya." LOL. Grissom may have agreed but who says they'll have any boys? Could be all girls? Or they could name the middle name after him. He didn't say that it had to be FIRST name and they never promised it'd be first name. No surprise Greg would try to blackmail them. Although I think they could get out of it simply by Grissom threatening Greg with a year's worth of decomp duty LOL.
toothchick 2008-05-27 ch 4,	abuseThis was too funny!
Flo1804 2008-05-27 ch 4,	abuse"dies laughing"...really ! Loved Mischievous Greg, and the “you two should name your first born son after me” line hilarious, not to mention Sara's reaction "holy freaking smokes!"...Thx for sharing it with us, you made my day !

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