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| Chelles 2008-04-21 ch 3, | abuseOh, man. That was funny! Another "mind candy" story. :) What a hilarious way for Greg to find out about them! This was a fun story to read. Thank you for sharing it. |
| Kristen 2008-04-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseI AM GOING TO DIE LAUGHING! HOLY SMOKES! I really don't know what else I can say... Kristen |
| run4cover 2008-04-15 ch 3, | abuseEpilogue? - Absolutely! What an absolut amazing and funny story. I liked the way they stayed cool and took it with humor. |
| ishotsherlock 2008-04-15 ch 3, | abusegreat and fluffy/funny chapter. yes to the epilogue. AKE:D |
| buckit 2008-04-14 ch 3, anon. | abusethat was funny. i enjoyed it. |
| BrookeGreene 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abuseLmao! Yep, if only they weren't such good looking people, their kitchen wouldn't be burnt ... lol. An epilogue would be interesting... what would that be about? They have a small explosion in the lab b/c Grissom's too busy staring at Sara's ** to pay attention to (something explosive)? And then she's too busy pretending not to notice him staring to pay attention to (whatever it is). Yep, I think I've discovered the REAL cause of the season 3 lab explosion... XD |
| CSIgsrFANOH 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abuseVery Funny! I can always go for an epilogue. I never get tired of good GSR stories! |
| Rozz 2008-04-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseOf course we would! I loved this one. It was short and sweet, even if it was three chapters I so completely encourage further writing!! Rozz |
| csibutterfly530 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abuselol loved it |
| Foxnomore 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abuseThat is so funny I just about died when the firefighters showed up:)Keep up the good work I love it. |
| toothchick 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abuseOMG! OMG! OMG! This was ABSOLUTELY HYSTERICAL! I laughed out loud several times! ( Chapter 3 was the BEST!) Seriously HOT! And I'm not just talking about the fire! YES! I want an Epilogue or a sequel-whatever I can get! I would love to see the gang's reaction! |
| jade40 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abuseFunny funny funny funny. |
| csifan2694 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abusethis is awesome! i love how greg came in! an epilouge would be cool. Viki |
| WalkerTRngr 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abuseEpilogue! Epilogue! LMAO! This was beyond great! It was AMAZING!! |
| MSCSIFANGSR 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abuseholy cow...i'd forget about cooking dinner to if that fine man walked into my house! heck, i'd forget my own name :) who ever this is...LOL |