I'd really like to see what happened!

i think its good except for the fact that emily wasnt murdered she wanted to die. i dont think that jessicas parents would have told her that lie at least not micheal

If Just another wannabe is right will you share you're gold with me? Nah nah just kidding. This is so awsome, purty please update!

Ack ! Continue soon please. I want to find out what happened to poor Chris. ;[

omg. love it.

Okay, so you have a very good idea here.

Theres no flow to your writing though. It's very choppy and hard to keep track of.

There are some really pretty lines in here. Once you get your flow down, I can tell you'll have gold.