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Poptart-Freak
2009-11-27 . chapter 18
i think that's your best chapter so far. very nice job with the argument.
WickedSoulx
2009-11-23 . chapter 12
OMG. I am an emotional wreck reading this. I've never cried so much in my life. You are an amazing writer to spark such emotions from me...and I'm not one to cry. I am going to keep reading on...I am so sucked into this plot.
SPINKLES
2009-11-23 . chapter 36
This story was epic. Truly a brilliant piece of fanfiction and I want to thank you for writing it.I stumbled across one of your stories by accident and now you're one of my favourite authors and this story is my all time favourite.I am so sad that it's over but I liked the way you ended it. It's not all sunshiny and fields of daisies and it never will be but the characters are dealing and we're left with the hope that they will be okay in the future.Again, I think that this story is brilliant with an amazing ntinue being an awesome writer...<3
mexicantt
2009-11-19 . chapter 32
"This took FOREVER, but its just right, in my opinion."

I didn't have to wait for this, but I completely agree. Perfect. You have written this story so well, made it beautiful, made the characters beautiful.
mexicantt
2009-11-16 . chapter 16
I love your story. Oh, so much. And I'm so glad I found it when it was already finished because I am just horrible at waiting and don't always do it well.

I also love that you said it's on like Donkey Kong. *snicker*
Poptart-Freak
2009-11-14 . chapter 5
amazing chapter. great detailing of the curse happening. loved it! ;]

~*~Poptart-Freak
maomao64
2009-11-10 . chapter 36
I loved it! This is by FAR the best Dramione I've read so far. And also the longest! You're writing style's great; if you decided to publish your works, (not includeing the ones with borrowed characters) I'm sure you'd have no problem succeeding.
su tzen-
2009-11-10 . chapter 36
omg... its such a nice story... its much better than twlight... seriously you can publish this as a book if you change a few names here and there...
deeps85
2009-11-06 . chapter 36
i had finished this story long time back but offline so cudnt post u a review thn and thn was travelling...

anyway i liked ur story. quite detailed and well paced. however, for all i love it, too much detailing was at time a problem. u had shown their inner dispute regarding their feeling for each other quite well but, at times, it became repetitive and i felt like skipping it. it took away pace from the story some times

all in all a good story
EagleBlaze
2009-11-03 . chapter 36
One word for this fanfic: Brilliant!

First off, I'm usually a cannon shipper (Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione) but I also can tolerate other various pairings to ;-). So out of curiosity of wanting to read a good Draco/Hermione fanfic, I stumbled upon yours. I'll admit that at first that I didn't like the way you portrayed Harry and Ginny but somehow I grew addicted to this fic (took me about a week to finish it) and realized that this version of Harry and Ginny needed to exist in order to make the story work (I actually wanted to beat Harry into a bloody pulp a couple of times, lol and I completely hated this Ginny).

I loved reading your fanfic and in which Draco managed to out manipulate Pavarti, Emil, and Hesper. I also liked the fact that you managed to tie in most of the cannon of the original novels with it (except the epilogue of book seven obviously). I also loved reading the Draco and Hermione moments as well, :-). The plot and the tension (I think that is the right word I'm looking for) was good enough that it kept me basically glued to the screen of the computer whenever I read one of your chapters. I was also glad that Hermione's family was finally able to be together (Matthew and her parents) that was really thoughtful. Also in the chapter where Draco was confronting Hesper and Emil about the transfer of the company, I (along with Draco) wanted to strangle that clock! Lol.

Overall, an excellent fanfic! Definitely a favorite!

Keep up the very good work!

EagleBlaze954
Kwebbeltje
2009-11-01 . chapter 36
loved the whole story, you're a great writer.
seibelle
2009-10-27 . chapter 36
hmm, at first i thought i wouldn't like this story because it was just too dark... very dark... in the end, i became hooked to it.. i remember a classmate telling me how she loved anne rice's way of writing... honestly, i haven't read her book but i think i kinda appreciate it now... i just love how you describe the atmosphere... so realistic.. i felt the characters... i'm not intoxicated btw... i just needed a good story to read to wander my mind off from reality and this proved to be good escape...

u know, i read this in a day! hehe.. mind you, it's really long.. but, worth it! thanks for sharing.. :)
Anna McNarin
2009-10-27 . chapter 36
All I have to say is Thank You! This is the first story I've seen that's kept Malfoy's personality intact and plausible. Character development was absolutely brilliant.
Azrulai
2009-10-24 . chapter 36
That was a FANTASTIC story. You have a knack for delicate emotions. Not that you haven't heard that before, I'm sure. Kudos.

- Az.
HerGoldenWings
2009-10-22 . chapter 36
Everytime I read a chapter I think of little oneshots to the side,
this story is amazing, and beautiful, and has made me cry many times.
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