i had finished this story long time back but offline so cudnt post u a review thn and thn was travelling...

anyway i liked ur story. quite detailed and well paced. however, for all i love it, too much detailing was at time a problem. u had shown their inner dispute regarding their feeling for each other quite well but, at times, it became repetitive and i felt like skipping it. it took away pace from the story some times

all in all a good story

One word for this fanfic: Brilliant!

First off, I'm usually a cannon shipper (Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione) but I also can tolerate other various pairings to ;-). So out of curiosity of wanting to read a good Draco/Hermione fanfic, I stumbled upon yours. I'll admit that at first that I didn't like the way you portrayed Harry and Ginny but somehow I grew addicted to this fic (took me about a week to finish it) and realized that this version of Harry and Ginny needed to exist in order to make the story work (I actually wanted to beat Harry into a bloody pulp a couple of times, lol and I completely hated this Ginny).

I loved reading your fanfic and in which Draco managed to out manipulate Pavarti, Emil, and Hesper. I also liked the fact that you managed to tie in most of the cannon of the original novels with it (except the epilogue of book seven obviously). I also loved reading the Draco and Hermione moments as well, :-). The plot and the tension (I think that is the right word I'm looking for) was good enough that it kept me basically glued to the screen of the computer whenever I read one of your chapters. I was also glad that Hermione's family was finally able to be together (Matthew and her parents) that was really thoughtful. Also in the chapter where Draco was confronting Hesper and Emil about the transfer of the company, I (along with Draco) wanted to strangle that clock! Lol.

Overall, an excellent fanfic! Definitely a favorite!

Keep up the very good work!

EagleBlaze954

loved the whole story, you're a great writer.

hmm, at first i thought i wouldn't like this story because it was just too dark... very dark... in the end, i became hooked to it.. i remember a classmate telling me how she loved anne rice's way of writing... honestly, i haven't read her book but i think i kinda appreciate it now... i just love how you describe the atmosphere... so realistic.. i felt the characters... i'm not intoxicated btw... i just needed a good story to read to wander my mind off from reality and this proved to be good escape...

u know, i read this in a day! hehe.. mind you, it's really long.. but, worth it! thanks for sharing.. :)

All I have to say is Thank You! This is the first story I've seen that's kept Malfoy's personality intact and plausible. Character development was absolutely brilliant.

That was a FANTASTIC story. You have a knack for delicate emotions. Not that you haven't heard that before, I'm sure. Kudos.

- Az.

Everytime I read a chapter I think of little oneshots to the side,
this story is amazing, and beautiful, and has made me cry many times.

I just want to say that this is a really good story- one of the best I've ever read in this fandom! I really like it that the relationship between Draco and Hermione didn't develop too fast...so it seemed real...thank you for this wonderful story!^^

That was a really amazing chapter. my heart is beating so fast! Having Harry abandon her and then having her get hurt was brilliant! I cant' wait to read more!

This was beautifully written. As a mother, it touched my heart and was a pleasure to read. I can't wait to see what else you have written.

That was beautiful, and remorseful and sad, and if you ever write a book, tell me straight away, because I will definatly want to read it.

When Ginny took off, did the dvd go with her?

You've just created a large urge for me too get a kitten.

I don't think I'll ever be the same after reading this story, it's made me acknowledge alot of things, it's made me cry alot, but I still think it's absolutly amazing, and heartwarming, and not for a minute do I regret reading it.

The word veagles reminds me of Smeegle or whatever his name is in Lord of the Rings, and Smeegle scares the absolute shit out of me, so I always get a shudder when thinking about these veales.

Did you make them up, or were they from a story?

The part with Matthew, it got me so bad, my eyes were so glassy, it just hit deep. It was amazing, it made me feel real loss.