 Pchu 3/11/10 . chapter 20I commend you. I really liked how this story ended. I also see that you changed the character category as well because it was really confusing before making think that this story would revolve around Jen and Wes when it really did not. I believe that was the case. I don't know. It was so long ago.
Anyway, for a story that really did not have an ending because this appear to have occurred in the middle of the actual Power Rangers timeline, I felt that the ending still felt somehow complete. I liked how Eric's character evolved throughout the story and became a plausible explanation for how he ultimately soften up his tough side and started working along side the other rangers.
Unfortunately, I am not too familiar with Supernatural so I really cannot make much comment on such characters and story plot. But for non-ranger characters I felt that they fit in nicely without a hitch.
Thanks so much for the story.
pchu |
 Giannola 2/25/10 . chapter 20 Glad to see that you came back to finish this great story. It just wouldn't feel right without having an ending for it. Hope to see more work from you soon. Your such a great writer. |
 QueenoftheSlayers 6/15/09 . chapter 19All I can say is SWEET! |
 Giannola 6/15/09 . chapter 19 Nice chapter. I really liked seeing some nice touching moments, like with Eric talking baseball with Dean and Sam. And then a very nice moment with Wes and Jen, with Jen worried that she'll lose Wes just like she had lost Alex.
Can't wait to see what you have in store for our heroes next, as I'm sure the worst of the battle is far from over. |
 Pchu 5/28/09 . chapter 18I am impressed by this story. The characterization was great, the fight scenes were great as well. I just kept reading just to see what will happen next. Although, I'm quite curious to see just how far you plan to take this story. My only complaint is that you tagged this as a Jen and Wes story which was seriously lacking in this story. If I wasn't looking for a Jen and Wes story then I wouldn't be sulking about it. However, I wouldn't take the credit away from you for a really great story. |
 Giannola 5/4/09 . chapter 18 Another great chapter. Loved how you ended it with Sam and Eric watching Star Wars. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
 cmar 4/15/09 . chapter 17Whew, an intense two chapters. The last one made me wince more than once. This one is very nicely thoughtful by comparison. I very much liked the section about Ransik and his respect/hatred for his enemies - gives a lot of depth to a complicated character. The last bit is of course my favorite, with Eric being so perfectly in character.
And I must admit Celia has turned into someone I care about, not so much because she's suffered but because she has a lot of depth and complexities of her own. |
 Giannola 4/9/09 . chapter 17 Great chapter. I really like how all of this is coming along. Supernatural is one of my favorite shows and I really like how you were able to come up with a crossover with one of power rangers best series. Keep it coming. |
 Giannola 3/21/09 . chapter 16 Sweet chapter. Never a dull moment, action all the way through. I just love it. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work. |
 cmar 2/25/09 . chapter 15Now that ff net will let me review...
No one writes a battle like you! Very intense. I really liked the parts with Angelique and at the end with Dominique, just for a moment making them a little human and sympathetic. The same goes for Ransik's love and concern for his daughter. Very nice touches in such a brutal fight scene. |
 Giannola 2/21/09 . chapter 15 Great to see a new chapter from this story. And you didn't disapoint, tons of action, with more on the way from the looks of it. Keep it up! |
 cmar 1/7/09 . chapter 14I really liked all the conversations here, and the looks at Wes's and Jen's backgrounds. Making Mr. Collins an ex-military man was a nice touch. Nice pacing - all of this felt like a thoughtful interlude before what I'm sure will be pure action next chapter. |
 crazedchick 9/2/08 . chapter 14Great story can't wait for more |
 Giannola 8/25/08 . chapter 14 Nice chapter. I really like the conversation between Dean and Wes and then the one with Sam and Jen was nice too. It looks like a big battle is up next. Can't wait. |
 cmar 8/14/08 . chapter 13An interesting couple of chapters; I enjoyed the background on both sides in the last one. Again nice action in this one, although again Sam and Dean seem a little bypassed in favor of Celia. Great conversation between the good guys about the differing motives of the bad guys; I like the way all of this was thought out.
Nice cameo in the first scene, btw! |