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Lucky Fannah 3/1/05 . chapter 6
I love how poor Evy starts to take care of the other children. The children are all in for a rough time, it seems. And these bad guys are nasty! Great chapter and wonderful characterizations once again!

Hugs,

Sheri
Lucky Fannah 3/1/05 . chapter 5
A younger sister named Nancy! That's cool and I really like Tristan and Catherine. Jonathan rolling his eyes at his sister is just like him. But he seems to be a great older brother, bless his little pea pickin' heart. At least Tristan and Catherine are old enough to drive and can get Jon where he needs to go to rescue Evy!

Hugs,

Sheri
Lucky Fannah 3/1/05 . chapter 4
Poor Evy! I like Alex a lot... good OC. The attention to detail is just wonderful! Great chapter!

Hugs,

Sheri
Lucky Fannah 3/1/05 . chapter 3
So Mr. Carnahan's not to blame here, thank goodness! Brilliant plot and characterizations! And poor Jonathan getting his fingers stepped on. He wants his sister back no matter what the cost! Bravo!

Hugs,

Sheri
Lucky Fannah 3/1/05 . chapter 2
Wonderful second chapter... keeping me guessing as to what or rather WHO is going on! I loved how Jonathan blamed himself for not getting his sister back right away... very typical of him, in my eyes. Poor Evy... her Dad is involved in this? Oh no!

Hugs,

Sheri
Lucky Fannah 3/1/05 . chapter 1
Wow! What a great start for this fic! I LOVE Evy and Jonathan together and you've taken just the right amount of humor and intrigue to hook me in! Perfect Evy! I love it!

Hugs,

Sheri
Evie of the Nile 2/27/02 . chapter 12
Ooooh! I see a sequel!...alrighty...I *want* to see a sequel! PLEAASE! pretty pretty please! this was an aswesome story! keep on writing for the mummy!

Rachel
Sarah Kathleen 2/25/02 . chapter 11
AAAHHH! The tension in absolutly killing me! (Oh, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while... ) PLEASE put the next chapter up VERY SOON!
Evie of the Nile 2/14/02 . chapter 11
oh dear, I can't wait too see what happens! very good so far :) can't wait for the rest.
Anubis Warrior 2/9/02 . chapter 10
This story is REALLY COOL! Post the rest SOON! PLEASE!
pharoahofdenial 2/8/02 . chapter 10
This story is SO awesome. Post the rest SOON!
nefertiri-oconnell 2/1/02 . chapter 8
you seriously can not stop there. please write more, heres a flower for you @-
Sarah Kathleen 1/30/02 . chapter 8
::gasp!:: AAHH! You've got to upload the next chapter REALLY REALLY SOON! Okay? Okay!
Jessi I dont feel like signing in oP 1/21/02 . chapter 1
Hey... great work. Keep it up. I can't wait to read more!
katie janeway 1/3/02 . chapter 6
Interesting...Very interesting...please continue.
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