very well done! :D

What I like most about this was how you so clearly described the tension between Nel and Nnoitra. It was like an intense mix of sexual and 'I hate you because you're superior/inferior to me' tension. Overall, a very engaging read. :)

I love it! :D

well hello and, allow me to say: if i can say it in Spanish. eso fue algo poco peculiar pero ameno al mismo tiempo, deberia continuar, cause there aren't many neliel x nnoitra fics out there, so give it some though the concept was really good and the spanish on it gave a lot of sazon.

Awesome fic. I don't understand Spanish, but it totally added to it.

That was...that was simply amazing. What a take on these two characters. Truly an incredible piece.

Téa

This fanfiction deserves a review. :D

The Spanish just adds to it .

Truth is, although I didn't understand a single of those words..

I could just imagine them saying it.

This was truly enjoyed ! :D

The prose may be purple, but the purple prose is perfect (woot for alliterative sentences that border on becoming tonguetwisters.)

My spanish, I will admit, is rusty. I understood about one word in three. But it is a credit to your writing that, even when missing those words, my lack of understanding didn't interrupt the flow of the piece.

In short, I like. A lot.

Lell

The Spanish really adds to this...hmm I'm not sure how to put it, but it gives it more flavor I suppose, a different dimension. I don't know much about Bleach but I still really enjoyed this, and those phrases just add so much.

The last two sentences are brilliant.

i love this oneshot but i think it wud make a great mini story :D *hint hint*, plz consider it XD

can u also write the meanings of the spanish sentences u used in this fic, im v interested to know :)

plz continue :)

They do need sections! I hate to plug my c2, but I've compiled every fanfiction of them. I'm pretty sure anyway. XD

I loved this a lot! You're one more person to add to the 'did friggin' awesome' list. :)

About time we got a decent fic' for these two, especially Nel...lots of potential there.