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| Angel-of-vampires 2008-07-27 ch 1, | abuseWow! This was really great! I loved that you used the 10 things that she hated about him in the movie and made them into 10 things she missed about him. That was really sweet |
| Coco-Minu 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseOddly amusing. |
| Fliz 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abusethis is really good and shows the feelings and it also goes into description. it can also makes u feel like you are atually there. also it doesnt have to much speech and not to much description that makes it good and not boring to read. |
| Delusional Illusionist 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseSweet. Like one of the other reviewers, my only suggestion is that you change the format so that the poem is obviously seperate from the rest of the story. |
| FilmMaker 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sweet.My suggestiopn is that you space the poem out so it's different form the rest of the story. |
| StrawberryShortcake22 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abusegogeous don't be scared wi love your story. this is my fave |