You've captured Michiru very nicely and showed the bond between mother and daughter very well.

i love seeing michiru's mama side.

Absolutely adorable story. I love the little throwbacks to trademark lines from the anime and manga while still keeping the story fresh. The characterizations were so insightful and the flow of the writing was effortless. Beautiful vignette.

michiru is so kawaii.. shes be the perfect momma

I love Michiru and I love the small moment she had with Haruka in this. :) It is sad that Hotaru has to put her mission before her childhood.

sweet! i love steamed vegetable! i'm a good kid!

I love your writing. Simple, short, yet soo sweet. Your interpretations of the Outers family is great. Thank you for writing!