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Reviews For: Jealous Guy

Cherry
2008-04-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was absolutely beautiful. I loved the format of the story, it worked really well, set against the pace. I honestly have no constructive critisism to make, it was amazing.
lily moonlight
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseA heartbreaking story, but I loved it. The refrain of time, the hour and the letter which has become a living thing. It hit hard how he had become another person to leave her. The pace and rhythm work perfectly like hearbeats as they move towards and away from each other. You describe their emotions searingly. Please write more soon.
shawdoo
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseWow - what an incredibly powerful story. I'm glad I finally got a chance to read your stories. I've heard such great things about them and all the reviews were true. You're an very talented writer. Thanks for sharing.
Moska
2008-04-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhat a beautiful yet heartwrenching story. Thank you so much for reposting. I haven't had the honor of reading your others, but your name has been mentioned to me by others that I had missed an excellent author who wrote Mac/Stella very, very well.
Dizzy-Dreamer
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseI squealed out loud for quite some time after reading the alert emails. I'm not sure I ever reviewed your stories before you removed them a couple of years ago, but they were among some of my favourite fanfics ever and I was heartbroken when they were taken down. And now they're back! This is totally the highlight of my entire week. I still love them just as much as I did previously, especially 'Jealous Guy'.
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