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| imaxgoxgnomgnomxonxya 2008-09-06 ch 10, | abusegauugh he's not wakin up yeett! gugh. i dunno wether Hisa is good or bad lol |
| Lonely Ghost666 2008-09-05 ch 10, | abuseperfect! the rain and thunder representing his sorrow and anger inside him. to bad it's only hurting him even more. i was worried about when your next chapter would come up. can't wait till the next one. |
| Tony WildRiver 2008-09-05 ch 10, | abuseYay! I wondered where you'd gone, but I never gave up hope ^_^ Anyway, excellent chapter. I love the way you write Hisa, and all of them to be honest. Most intriguing ^_^ |
| Elycat 2008-09-04 ch 10, | abusePoor Ganju. It's a pity he isn't a shinigami, because I have a feeling that if he did, his zanpakutou would practically try to beat Hisa into submission when they visited... Good for Hana. It looks like something in him is a lot stronger than anyone else realizes, to still be trusting his friends even now. |
| Bibliotheque 2008-08-30 ch 9, | abuseOh my god, I adore this. It's so dark and sad. I just want to hug poor Hana. I can't wait for you to update! I'm so glad I found nice Hana-torment, and I was sad when I got to the latest chapter and there wasn't any more. |
| Havenoname 2008-08-01 ch 9, | abuseWas Hisagomaru always this messed up in the head? I know I said something similar a few times before, but holy crap! Now add that we have a kitty vampire now! Lets add again when we see that it attacks others like it has rabies if it gets very angry! Did it become like this because Hanataro would sometimes forget where he placed his zanpakuto? And is Hisa a he or a she? I know I said he before but I noticed that every time the focus is on Hisa (or when somebody is talking about Hisa) it's always "it... it... it..." I'm a little too lazy to check back in previous chapters to see if you slipped on any of them. Then again, maybe not knowing makes Hisa a little more scary... P. S. I know I should have replied a long time ago (like a LONG time ago) but Robert Ludlum is not a horror author like Stephen King. I just mentioned him because I like to expand my reading. Though after this long, you probably already know now. But I did just recently buy my next King book. Christine! Yes, the evil car! I haven't started reading it yet but I will soon. Maybe tonight! |
| Artificial Life Creator 2008-07-30 ch 9, | abusewhy not itegumo pop into hanataro's realm from the top and whoop down and carry hana away? |
| Lonely Ghost666 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abusethis story is great. hisagomaru's cruel and manipulative personality is a perfect contrast to hanataro's gullible and caring personality. you work every detail in perfectly. |
| Kairikiani 2008-07-29 ch 9, anon. | abuseAbsolutely amazing. I like how you made Hanataro's reactions towards Hisa change so subtly. You characterize everyone perfectly. I also like the interaction between the zanpakutos; their personalities are very detailed. Please continue. |
| Elycat 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abuseWell, I have to say Isane's right to be worried about his mental state... o-o If he does wake, maybe Hisa's manipulation will have hurt him beyond recovery. Hopefully that won't be the case, but Hisa is so vicious that I wouldn't be surprised. Hisa's willingness to resort to violence makes me wonder - if he gets really frustrated, he might well attack Hana. And it also makes me wonder what would happen if Hanatarou ever attained bankai - zanpakuto materialization, after all, is required. I can't imagine the result being good in any case... small Hisagomaru might be, but I just can't imagine Hana ever being able to stand up to Hisa's mind games, not even if he was in a better state than now. I'm also curious if Ichigo and Rukia will ever appear here? They're definitely two people very important to him... heck, it was because of Rukia that he first gained some confidence in who knows how long. (On the other hand, I admit it would make sense for timeline reasons for you to stay away from using anyone from the living world.) |
| irenia 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh! UPDATE PLEASE |
| Seiun no Konpaku 2008-07-14 ch 8, | abuseI like~ =D By the way, since Hanatarou is stuck in his own head, how come he can't change anything there (like adding color)? P.S. Turning off the anonymous review disabler will get you more reviews. |
| Elycat 2008-07-10 ch 8, | abuseEsh, Hana... it looks like Hisa's gone beyond "feeding" mentally off him now. It's a real parasite. And Isane... looks like this might break her as well. I hope she can stay strong for Hana... |
| Artificial Life Creator 2008-07-10 ch 8, | abusepoor isane... her heart's in the right place, while hanataro's may be slightly off kanter |
| kriitikko 2008-07-03 ch 7, | abuseInteresting story you have here. Can't wait to read more. |